Crime_Lord

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A story about an ordinary young man who suddenly awakens magical powers. But contrary to expectations, he will follow a not-so-well-liked path. In the midst of his poverty and bad situation, the MC will take the place of those who once oppressed him. His journey involves revenge, brutality, maturity, and skepticism. On his journey to a better position, he will encounter mundane problems but also difficult-to-predict situations. There will be no harem and no R18. The frequency of chapters will vary according to the performance of the novel. I have time to write up to 2 chapters a day. I'm no expert in English, but you can expect a text that you'll understand more than 90% of the time. In any case, I'm available to make corrections and explain whatever is necessary. The story will develop little by little, but eventually, you will have a complete world here, from information that serves to compose the world to more well-developed plots. I like well-explained novels with a world to explore. It takes a while to understand the direction this text is taking, but after the first 20 chapters, you'll already have a good idea. If you can, trying to read more than that will help you understand the idea of the text. Anyway, I'm here to answer any questions.

Sigh... I don't usually post reviews, but the disappointment here was so great that I needed to do it this time. First, I must say that this novel really has a different concept, but it is exceptionally poorly developed. In the first six chapters, you will notice how repetitive the writing of the text is, which gets irritating very quickly. But that's not by far the worst problem. Worst of all are the ways the characters act, think. It just doesn't make any sense. In fact, here I had the opportunity to read the most absurd things I've ever seen! For example, the elders of the MC's family acts in a highly childish, naive, and stupid way. An elder simply decides that taking the greatest genius in the family for a casual trip is considered OK when that genius has only a few days since birth. The family ancestor, someone who should be experienced enough to be careful, simply tells the truth about his family's genius to a bunch of strangers. I mean, seriously? Such a thing should be the family's biggest secret. They should protect it even from the family members themselves to prevent leaks. However, they act as if there are no attempts to assassinate geniuses in this world, as if it were a peaceful place where a genius can peacefully grow... And obviously, this world is not like that, as no author would miss the opportunity to write dozens of chapters on assassination attempts, revenge, etc. And if you're not convinced, there's still a character who simply falls in love with a newborn... Again, really? Is this really something that makes any sense to anyone? Anyway, that's what I saw in this novel, and I'm sincerely disappointed. I thought this would be a good read, but I will have to stop there, as I can't enjoy reading a text with these problems. But if you think these things are acceptable, or you can turn your brain off while reading, then maybe this is your cup of tea...

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