The Indoctrination part is a modified single way unbreakable vow where one of the parties is an organization/authorized individuals that represent the organization. Think of it as a verbal magical contract.
Yeah I might change the quotes to the correct double quotes but I find that when I quote within dialogue then the single quotes just look out of place instead of if I single quote dialogue and double quote quotes it looks cleaner but that's just my personal preference.
Lol thanks but I got this story starter from one of those hey I'm going to write one chapter of an interesting idea/concept and then not go further. The idea was interesting to me so I tweaked it slightly to make Lily less of a overt gold digger and you know not the kind of person who would resort to giving Slugghorn a quickie or two for tutoring.
Snape isn’t a pureblood family my guy. The pureblood family he’s connected to is Prince. So in a world that cares about that sort of thing would you choose the option that kept you having a muggle last name.
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original The New Half-blood Prince
What if Lily paid more attention to the goings on in the wizarding world and realized that morality will get her and her future family killed so she took advantage of her perceived brightest witch of her age innocent muggleborn girl persona. This story is how this changes Harry and the wizarding world. This story is Dark with a capital D. After the first chapter it will be relatively not dark but might have dark elements like an enslaved muggle here or there. With strong cult themes.12 Chs 238 お気に入り
Great fanfiction however if someone wants to read ahead search AO3 for Searching For The Power where this has been lifted from
In Pursuit of the Unknown Power
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