Noblesseking

His only goal is to find his father?

You did great start honestly nd everything so far is perfect ...thats where my request come....don't make him pathetic....like some dumb character who fall for random girl or suddenly thinking of family and all for no reason..atleast he should be most selfish till the end

So most of his action will be morally unquestionable??......like being a vampire and feeling bad about drinking blood isn't it kind of weird....shouldn't it be their basic instinct?

Like seriously mann???such a bland novel getting so famous-..............................................................................................................................................

Still....consequence of that can be quite horrible....a company like fb,insta,google would have silenced him to get program for themselves...if it was in real

sigh~why is every story start out great but regress slowly.....i really can't comprehend is brain get deviated or not able to process further......tbh noting special and mostly chirped off plotlines from others-

Isn't he a bit too open.....like how can a person suddenly become all so powerfull...

It's copied off another novel....just a bit of a difference in story-

I have a suggestion for ya if you didnt use it till now.....why don't he increase his talent.......won't it be better and reduce the points needed to cultivate waste talent?

I hope this gem will always usher in bright illuminating the light of many soulless spirits-(don't make him stupid even if he do mistake but not by the cause of affection)..........