Endless_Reader

male LV 4

Does it matter?

2021-02-22 入りました New Zealand
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Endless_Reader
Endless_Reader
2 months ago
Commented

what an idiot, whenever you complete your work before time. always make sure that you show how busy you are so that no more tasks are assigned to you or no else disturbs you

This was a task too difficult for an intern, but Ortega had surpassed her expectations by completing it all within an hour.

From Office Boy To Alpha Male

From Office Boy To Alpha Male

Urban · Cloutchaser

Endless_Reader
Endless_Reader
2 months ago
Commented

After being in coma for more than 6 months, no muscle loss. Great, just great.

Due to being shirtless, Vidyut's V-shaped eight-pack abs were visible! Tough muscles! Muscular arms! Illuminated by the room's white LED light, his charming look was enhanced several times over.

The devil's pure passion

The devil's pure passion

Urban · Extinctmystery

Endless_Reader
Endless_Reader
3 months ago
Commented

What is that wish, I want to know, uhhh

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Endless_Reader
3 months ago
Commented

Could he not have created money out of thin air?

"I will guide you in the direction. The anchor's soul has been placed into the body of a slave, and she will be considered insane due to the situation in the other world. You can easily buy her at a low price. I suggest you earn some money on the way; even the cheapest slaves will require some currency from you."

The Goddess Salvation System

The Goddess Salvation System

Fantasy · c_l_dd

Endless_Reader
Endless_Reader
1 years ago
Commented

Author, the book doesn't support power stone voting. Wait for a while, at least a week, before the voting can be enabled for your book.

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Endless_Reader
Endless_Reader
1 years ago
Replied to shounengirl

You're welcome☺

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Endless_Reader
1 years ago
Replied to Endless_Reader

My intention is not to demean your work, just giving my opinions and sharing experience while reading. If you find yourself offended, well then my apologies.

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Endless_Reader
1 years ago
Commented

The plotline of the novel is good, and I as a veteran Webnovel reader find much potential to be unearthed. One thing I would like to suggest is the tone of dialogues for different characters, it feels as though same character is speaking for others as well. It might be subconscious action, but I think someone would find it uncomfortable while reading because I surely do. However, if you work on it, it might get better with time. Good luck for your future endeavors.

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Endless_Reader
Endless_Reader
3 years ago
Replied to Endless_Reader

exp

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