Akil_Andre

male LV 4

i like to be in quiet places

2021-02-23 入りました Trinidad & Tobago
バッジ 7

Moments 17
Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
6 days ago
Posted

your story is not bad but your writing when progressing is getting repetative in making a point about lucian . i would also like to think that the fl should be avey because how your put your story it seems like her and his family were essentially brainwashed to ignore him for the plot of the world he's in. the other girl having her be there and her relationship with the mc seems forced and would make no point for them to be together with him and her especialy with how she wants to kill some or most of the people who will eventually grow close to him as a yandere and him who loves his friends and family wholeheartedly and she will eventually kill someone.

Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
4 months ago
Posted

it is the most stupid book about traveling back to the past and getting a system that does nothing and takes a while to perform song in public

Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
8 months ago
Posted

this book is okay if u want an undiscive character that cant seem to choose if he wants to be with shogun who this stupid book has in the title all in it frustrating and overall a shitty read

Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
9 months ago
Replied to omnioutergod

r u stupid he can change her and shes a banshee

Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
9 months ago
Commented

let him become a civilian

If you could, would you help Lee or let him become a civilian?

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

Anime & Comics · Cadenadeaventuras

Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
10 months ago
Posted

the writing is TRASH your story make no sense main character is just shit with horrible quality and its just a plain crappy story that should not cost coins beacause its not worth it to pay to read that garbage

Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
10 months ago
Commented

i 1000% agree

Before anyone asks, NO, there will be no more love interests, as now a days, I am leaning towards the no harem group, as it is far easier to write, and makes a lot more sense, logically. Not to mention, Hope doesn't seem like the type to want to share.

Unique Gamers Travels

Unique Gamers Travels

TV · ArtoriaPendragon_

Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
1 years ago
Commented

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Akil_Andre
Akil_Andre
1 years ago
Commented

i love rosalie hope they get together