Sorry, it took too long to make a review. I really like it but there are things that I don't understand. I can't really say what but it's a reader's instinct. Other than that it's great. I laughed when I saw the name 'Zeref'. I just can't unsee Zeref from fairy tail.
I've been tricked, backstabbed, and quite possibly bamboozled.
Nooo! Why?!
I came earlier home, and I caught my wife with another man...
" THE UNKNOWN "
Horror · Sorin_Deishuu
lmao
When I was in the plane, I was only thinking about how awful I was as a teacher. I think they hated me a lot if they made a book called "Death Note" and wrote my name all over the book, "Michael Smith, dying of cancer", "Michael Smith, drowned".
" THE UNKNOWN "
Horror · Sorin_Deishuu
Wholesome. I want to be in a relationship too :'(
"Because you were my dream, because I wanted to start a family with you."
" THE UNKNOWN "
Horror · Sorin_Deishuu
It's an interesting start. I didn't get the last scene but I'll read the next chapter to find out.
That's a lot of nos.
"No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no,no, no, no, no, no, NO! I KNOW THAT WRITING!" he screamed "I swear on my name Michael Smith that I will find out who this guy is, even if it means my death." he fell in his knees and started crying. "I lost my parents... my wife... my children... I have nothing to lose!"
" THE UNKNOWN "
Horror · Sorin_Deishuu
The election will be canceled.
Thanks for your review. About the names...thanks for pointing that out. Now that I look at it, it sure needs a little editing. As for the 'Eren's' shirt, I just got the idea from Levi's. (if you don't know what that is, I think it's a brand) The racism stuff...I don't get what you are talking about. I just pictured some random GTA gangster when I made the gorilla guy. But please do tell me why you got the idea because you're scaring me right now. What if my book gets super popular but I won't get anything from it because people cancel it because they saw some racist thing? Jk. Again, thanks for the review. You will be remembered as the first. "Exotic yet refined." Sincerely, The Humble Author - Engrishu
Thanks for reviewing. I'll try to improve it.
Bent Reality
Fantasy · Engrishu