For your first fan-fiction, it’s really impressive. I’m enjoying it and I haven’t be seeing any the normal overused ideas
I know there were mistakes, plot holes, slow plots, mundane details, etc., in the previous chapters. I am, but I am a regular human, and this is my first fan fiction—my first time writing anything. I am bound to make mistakes. All I can do is grow and improve, and hopefully, you will stay along for the journey.
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Fright Night Remake: Jerry
"Hello!" Jerry greeted Charley while staring at him with a mocking smile.
Priest, Pray For Us
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Fright Night: Jerry
"Hello!" Jerry greeted Charley while staring at him with a mocking smile.
Priest, Pray For Us
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Fright Night Remake: Charley Brewster
"We probably know each other. Do you need something?" The guy named Charley Brewster looked at Anton with a bit of suspicion and a very nervous tone.
Priest, Pray For Us
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Fright Night: Charley Brewster
"We probably know each other. Do you need something?" The guy named Charley Brewster looked at Anton with a bit of suspicion and a very nervous tone.
Priest, Pray For Us
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Supernatural: Dean Winchester
"Well, my brother went to study law while I continued with the family business." Dean responded with a slightly heavy voice.
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Devil: Two other guards
The guard who heard this question stared at the elevator's security camera footage, pondering who among them could be the killer. Following normal reasoning, he focused on the man who was the guard. The others were ordinary civilians, so attention should be on the strongest ones, and besides the guard, there was the mechanic.
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Devil: Other Woman
One of the men was a guard who, until recently, was worried about being fired for not being at his job. The second living man was a mechanic, the elderly woman, who was known very little, and the woman who kept panicking. Everyone stared at the mattress salesman's corpse, each taking a corner of the elevator while entering a state of panic.
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Devil: Old woman
One of the men was a guard who, until recently, was worried about being fired for not being at his job. The second living man was a mechanic, the elderly woman, who was known very little, and the woman who kept panicking. Everyone stared at the mattress salesman's corpse, each taking a corner of the elevator while entering a state of panic.
Priest, Pray For Us
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I know there were mistakes, plot holes, slow plots, mundane details, etc., in the previous chapters. I am, but I am a regular human, and this is my first fan fiction—my first time writing anything. I am bound to make mistakes. All I can do is grow and improve, and hopefully, you will stay along for the journey.
Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius
Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday