Hello author, good writing so far. My only criticism would be that sometimes, the talks of a the protagonist and his thoughts are really close together, so it makes it a but confusing imo.
"Wait, so I'm talking to the God-Emperor of Mankind? The Holy Daddy?" Franklin quipped, only to be blasted by a psychic wave from the Emperor.
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69
Bane would be proud
"Liberty," he roared, lifting a daemon overhead, "or nothing!" The creature's spine shattered as he brought it down across his knee, its death scream lost in the cacophony of battle.
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69
Dorn interrupted, his face utterly deadpan. "I see. By this logic, I should henceforth be known as Ro-Do. Truly, this is the height of nomenclatural efficiency. I must inform the Emperor at once."
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69
"Oh, lay off with the formalities. My name is Furinji Hayato. Just call me Hayato, Mr. Neighbour."
Isekai Restuarant (Rewrite)
Anime & Comics · CrossEdge
"Happy Birthday to me, I guess." I sighed.
Isekai Restuarant (Rewrite)
Anime & Comics · CrossEdge
"I'm Adam Fucking Smasher, of course I'd win."
An Engineer In Night City
Video Games · Ryuanwrites
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Covenant of Fire [Elden Ring]
Video Games · StrangeCrest
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~Hades~
Book&Literature · Willian_Salt_5874
Happy Holidays!
(I'm taking a break this week. I'm working on an important arc, and since it's the holidays anyway, I decided to take some time off. I'll see you guys back next Monday.)
Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
TV · Alittlepiggy33