Cloud_Clpid

Cloud_Clpid

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2021-01-19 入りました Global
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Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
7 months ago
Posted

The ability the mc gets is pretty cool and I liked that he immediately went to go train but other than that the mc just sucks. He wants to take revenge on Hajin and the original cast as if they are the reason he was sent to their world and in general the mc is just hating on every person he’s interacted with. The mc also makes a claim to stay out of the plot as much as possible then immediately starts writing down some opportunities he wants to steal like aether.

Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
7 months ago
Commented

The hate he has is so random man I hope he’s not like this in the later chapters

'Who the hell would look down on 5 million won? Oh wait the fucking rick kids: Chae Nayun, Yoo Yeonha, and Shin Jonghak. They just moved up on the revenge list.'

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Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
7 months ago
Commented

That is such an edgy thought process if you’re going to be mad at anybody it should be the entity that threw you into the world

'Yeah he's dead right after, Hajin, Suho, the other main cast characters, the bastard who sent the laptop, and the annoying neighbor.'

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Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
7 months ago
Replied to Emil_Smajic

Voldemort doesn’t know anything about his horcruxes I remember Harry asking that question to dumbeldore and he told him that each one should be essentially independent of each other

Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
7 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter! I do think the romance was a little bit rushed like we skipped a few chapters of just them interacting but overall was pretty good I can’t wait to read more of this story

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Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
7 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter !

Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
7 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter !

Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
8 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter

Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
8 months ago
Replied to SMNovels

I hope you keep it small like 2 maybe 3 girls if it works well with the story you have planned out

Cloud_Clpid
Cloud_Clpid
8 months ago
Replied to SMNovels

Will your mc have a big harem ?