I apologize like I said new writer and I do all my own editing I try to make it as grammatically correct as I can but sometimes stuff slips through. But thanks you for the comment I genuinely appreciate it as I want to make this as good a novel as I can hope you stick around and help keep me honest and push me to do better
"Now isn't the time to argue quick just go get the children while I hold this up " Tyler responded. The older man looked at Tyler one last time before begrudgingly accepting thinking ' I lack the strength of the kid no young man I just need to be quick and we can all get out of here ' as he rushed past , Tyler saw the man who was well past his prime blow through the door with his shoulder ' very impressive old man ' he thought soon the man reappeared holding 2 small children . Tyler realized the gap would need to be wider as the children were unconscious so he grit his teary and pushed harder. As the fire fighter squeezed pass with the children , both men were greated by a loud snap followed by Tyler screaming. The wall fragment that Tyler was somehow holding up snapped and crushed his legs .
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Thanks for letting me know I corrected it
When we arrive back in the training facility I ask Vinny and Sara if I can have a minute alone so I can explain everything to Tsun. I understand and agree and both wish me luck. When I let her out of the ball she seems excited since I already promised her las night that I would battle with her today. Since she was still upset about not getting a chance to fight. When I started explaining who we would be fighting and how strong they are she seemed to get even happier as she hopped around snorting with her eyes closed in an eye smile. (Picture) though she seemed less amused when I told her we may need to forfeit. She stubbornly kept refusing. I tried to reason with her saying I didn't want her to get hurt like Eevee and that Alex may try to deliberately hurt her in the battle. She just asked " why I didn't trust her to win" with a sad face. I was at a loss for words before I a told her I do trust her that I believe she will one day be the strongest pokemon and that she'll help me become the strongest trainer ever. "That's why I can never give up" is what she said back to that. I smiled and replied. " then let's go win"
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Also his father did preface it wants a real title more a rumor, legend, a dream for trainers to aspire to sort of like how we call athletes GOATs it’s not a real title but something only a few have the potential to earn
Because the protagonist becomes the first one and this is his story/ tale
Pidgeot is his fathers fastest Pokemon but there are other faster Pokemon out there. He is referring to the ability speed boost which like in games raises the Pokémon’s speed in battle. It also has extra effects in this universe in general that hasn’t come up yet as Lucas hasn’t had enough experience with Pokémon’s abilities to realize that this universe is different than the game
As we wondered the store i activated my eyes. doing tests with my father when i was younger we discover I could also see the potential and ability of eggs. I couldn't see anything else but that was becuase the Pokemon had no lvl or stats at this point, but this was more than enough. As I perused the store with my family my sister had run up to hold my hand and help me find a good egg. I started the search in the Zubat section. I always loved Crobat and it was the epitome of a extremely fast hard hitting Pokemon that I planed to build my style of battle around.
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Tom
"It's alright Tom she isn't wrong I had to risk everything on a 50/50 that I luckily guessed right on. Besides I can see she's your friend and it's a friends job to have each others back. I hope that we can also one day be friends as I thoroughly enjoyed our battle." "Well at least your humble and aren't letting the fluke go to your head. I'm Angela, and Tommy and I have been friends since we could crawl. Our families have been friends for generations with our mothers acting like sisters." "Nice to meet you Angela but I'm afraid I have to go to the medical office so if you'll excuse me." I said politely excusing myself. "Same here might as well let's go together. I'll see you after I'm done Angie." Tommy said with a cheeky grin. Not noticing her blush, but I did. (Angela/ Tom pictures also what the school uniform looks like)
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Angela
"It's alright Tom she isn't wrong I had to risk everything on a 50/50 that I luckily guessed right on. Besides I can see she's your friend and it's a friends job to have each others back. I hope that we can also one day be friends as I thoroughly enjoyed our battle." "Well at least your humble and aren't letting the fluke go to your head. I'm Angela, and Tommy and I have been friends since we could crawl. Our families have been friends for generations with our mothers acting like sisters." "Nice to meet you Angela but I'm afraid I have to go to the medical office so if you'll excuse me." I said politely excusing myself. "Same here might as well let's go together. I'll see you after I'm done Angie." Tommy said with a cheeky grin. Not noticing her blush, but I did. (Angela/ Tom pictures also what the school uniform looks like)
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"It's alright Tom she isn't wrong I had to risk everything on a 50/50 that I luckily guessed right on. Besides I can see she's your friend and it's a friends job to have each others back. I hope that we can also one day be friends as I thoroughly enjoyed our battle." "Well at least your humble and aren't letting the fluke go to your head. I'm Angela, and Tommy and I have been friends since we could crawl. Our families have been friends for generations with our mothers acting like sisters." "Nice to meet you Angela but I'm afraid I have to go to the medical office so if you'll excuse me." I said politely excusing myself. "Same here might as well let's go together. I'll see you after I'm done Angie." Tommy said with a cheeky grin. Not noticing her blush, but I did. (Angela/ Tom pictures also what the school uniform looks like)
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original The Tale of the first Pokemon Master
Tyler is reborn into the world of Pokemon due to an angel rewarding him . follow him in his journey as he faces heartbreak and victory all while living the dream he’s had ever since he played his Pokemon game when he was 5 .20 Chs 299 お気に入り
Well I guess I’ll do a realistic review myself though as the author I may be a bit biased. I do think this novel is worth a read to anyone who enjoys Pokemon fanfics. I know it’s not perfect and could definitely be improved in a number of ways but I feel it has been getting better as a imwrite more a more. My punctuation and grammar aren’t perfect but compared to a lot of other novels I feel that it is better than average. I also try to use a wide variety of descriptive words so the story isn’t repetitive and I add pictures of important characters.
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