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novels is pretty good.. translation is pretty good.. author fixes the error if mentioned..
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chapter need some editing
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this chapter needs some editing
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even meng guan shouldn't exceed about 20 to 30 years older than mc..?
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how did you come up to 208 years..? if im correct he was between 55 - 60 years when he became a foundation establishment cultivator.. then he spend about 20 to 30 years from early to mid.. en now he had some years of seclusion etc.. 15 - 20 years..
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need some editing
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or is Wei Fan taking over... then previous chapters needs more editing
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original SI AU Naruto
just read it if you want.. if not.. go read another FF.. this FF is just to get starting with writing novels and explore/develop my creativity and writing style for my original novel..0 Chs 0 お気に入り
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Xianxia :I live for ever in Cultivation World
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