Kamikage_1774

Who doesn't appreciate some good Oyakodon? Anyone who can't understand it's greatness simply has no taste.

Honestly, I don't mind when a protagonist takes issue with fantasy slavery and tries to unexist it, especially when the slavery system is one of the more unforgiving ones that emulate slavery as experienced in our world. It can even make for an interesting arc where the protagonist frees an entire race of people and restores them to the power of a country, or at least gets the ball rolling. The main issue comes from when an idiot comes in and tries to screw with things without understanding or thinking through anything. Some authors really don't think much further than "Slavery bad, me include slavery, MC stop slavery, MC look good" and, while things like that have their place, that is a very boring setting to see repeated a hundred times over.

Sorry to comment on a 2 month old comment, but is there any real difference between Yasenia impregnating one of the girls and her getting impregnated by Andrea? Or is it simply that you don't like the idea of them having kids at all in the novel? I can kinda understand the latter, kids in amy series have a good chance of ruining the entire thing if not handled well, but I can't grasp the former.

Codependency can certainly be worrisome if not addressed properly. If she becomes like this every time they get separated there will truly be issues, both for Yasenia and her own cultivation(Yasenia constantly worrying about how Angel will feel if she leaves for training or missions or excursions and Angel likely forming heart demons over the, even if temporary, abandonments)

I'm sorry, but I just don't understand. Yasenia's mentor, who's name escapes me at the moment, said she wanted to let Yasenia feel frustration by failing to use the sword properly, but then Mason comes and she just...allows him to tell her? What was the point of her struggling for a week then? It's not like she felt all that much frustration, and it's not like there is much frustration to be felt from simply failing to use an extremely high level weapon with absolutely zero guidance or information on what mistakes she was making. It just makes it feel like Yasenia spent a full week making much lower gains training wise outside of comprehending her elements for absolutely no reason. Apologies for the long rant, it's just that this entire situation confuses me.

Eh, there are much worse things for one to be into. I should know, I'm the number one degenerate 'round these parts.

Y'know, I can't help but doubt that considering the woman who has mastered the law of fate specifically gave you 5 "slots"

People like this guy are what give harems and other such relationships a bad rep in novels like this. I get wanting to have someone that can increase your power easily, and even being aggressive in order to obtain them, but at a certain point you have to act like a reasonable adult right? Yeah yeah, might makes right or whatever stupid rule cultivation worlds have, but acting like this ruins the trust anyone has for you being a worthwhile individual/power to associate with.

Honestly, it could be a lot worse. She and her family are dead, but she can still experience the world, even if only as a spectator, and she can take a bit of solace that she knows where her family is, even if they are only mindless thralls to be used for battle.

Wait, was this originally posted on ScribbleHub? I actually came here from AO3 because I thought this was where the images were. Eh, too late to go back now, plus the comment feature here is easier to put my thoughts together anyways.