thanks. I wanted it to be longer, because It was too bland. This chapter was rushed because I wanted it to be over with. I'll try to fix it tomorrow to make the conversation more natural.
"Owl... she's a good kid, but still... Once the power of this potion gets exposed to the outside world... What's the difference between being a dog for the Dungeon? They have betrayed humanity as a whole!" Hermes couldn't wrap his head around the fact mortals willingly throw their humanity when they can get the falna from gods.
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Damn, you're right, I'll fix that!
thanks, I fixed it. Just discover this function in inkstone. I didn't know you could post the errors through messages. Thanks.
where exactly, I'll try to fix it, but I'm bad with English, I just use Grammarly for correction.
"Owl... she's a good kid, but still... Once the power of this potion gets exposed to the outside world... What's the difference between being a dog for the Dungeon? They have betrayed humanity as a whole!" Hermes couldn't wrap his head around the fact mortals willingly throw their humanity when they can get the falna from gods.
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Thanks for the correction. I swear to god, I fixed these before, but they keep coming back :(
My bad, General Bradley is just a sequence 4 Iron-Blooded Knight.
what made "Tokyo video game tycoon" was that his competition had competency, so far, it's absent here.
originally wanted to name it that, but decided that they don't have an empire. so maybe later.
The gods are on fire and in a state of excitement. A week earlier, they all had mysteriously received a letter of invitation to a dubious town and nation called "Silent Hill" and "United Kingdom Of Man". They chalk it up as a prank, they have never heard of such a place. What they didn't expect was for their host to graciously arrive at their doorstep to invite them.
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side chapter later.
that's awesome. I didn't think of scamming her because I thought too narrowly. It could have a cool dynamic. But Ifrit will become a real help later. she has a special purpose later along with Miss doll. I'll think about it.
Is It Wrong To Act Mysteriously In the Dungeon?(LOTM/Danmachi)
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