mi estilo es tan dificil de leer?
Thanks for your recommendation, do you know any bot that you can recommend me?
Thank you very much for your comments, I have tried to review the spaces and I really could not find a solution, I will contact the support team to ask for help on that. About the writing and others maybe it has something to do with the fact that I do not speak English natively, I think it is better written in the version of its original language, but when translating it in an ******* way it loses quality, even so I will do more to improve the quality of the translation, because it is not yet possible for me to pay for a qualified translator for this task at the moment.
Hello, thank you very much for your comment, I will ask for help with that, I do not speak English and it is likely that that is why it is not understood well, thank you for telling me the error.
I suppose that rating your work yourself is a bad thing, however I hope that this action encourages other people to give me their opinions and ratings so that I can improve as a writer
In a couple of days the new chapter will be published :) Thank you very much for your comment, it is the first I receive on this page and it is very important to me.
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original Lunatic by J.A Barrientos ing
Between violence and seduction, madness and friendship, a journey filled with horror and beauty, where the hallucinatory and the dark merge into a mystery that interweaves all the characters and forge them at every step they take on this fantastic journey, while the world is filled with absolute terror at the hands of the subject carrying a red moon on their back.12 Chs 3 お気に入り
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Lunatic by J.A Barrientos
Entre la violencia y la seducción, la locura y la amistad, un viaje cargado de horror y belleza, donde lo alucinante y lo oscuro se funden en un misterio que entrelaza a todos los personajes y los forja a cada paso que dan en este fantástico viaje, mientras el mundo se llena de terror absoluto a manos del sujeto que porta una luna roja en su espalda.12 Chs 3 お気に入り
- original
THE AWAKENING
Giorno, who had reencarnated as Demon King, after an endless war against the humans heros, finally is defeated. By the end his life as Demon King, return his life as a human in the same point when he left it. He living in a pigsty, bathed in vomit that had take off the his life cause for his drunkenness, whith a misery employee and a break family whom he abandonated. What will be the destiny of who was the Demons Lord, who is now a simple human? and even more important, what was that other world?24 Chs 109 お気に入り
Thank you very much for your comments, really being able to interact with those who enjoy a humble story like mine fills me with motivation, currently I do not have anyone who translates me for that reason I have not uploaded more chapters, but I work hard to find a replacement and post again, I have even thought about translating them myself even if the translation is not the best, again thank you very much for reading me
THE AWAKENING
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