Webnovel Author: The_Celestial_King - Novel Collection

This is how make things hyped. Rather than give Rowan all the advantages because of MC Force, you give his enemies impossible advantage that make us reader wonder how he can overcome them.

I feel like the last four chapters could have became only one. Nothing happened in them.

I really don't like this development. It's so predictable progression to make every parent to Rowan is just bad.

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How can he still be a mortal

I see you want Rowan to be like his father. A manipulator that will do anything for his goals. To me, the very reason I began to like him was him realising he was becoming his father and gave Andar his freedom even though Andar didn't want it. If Rowan became his father then there is no development to Rowan character, he will be just a mad man replacing another mad man. Beside, what will Andar do in the battle of this scale. Even Lost, was just speacial as he is a Primordial Energy.

Immortals retained a hope that there might be salvation but Mortal didnt have that. Infact, Mortal live do few decade and that all but jumped to danger nonetheless. All immortal that were shown has live for millions of not more, they already experienced what was needed

Certainly, that isn't a reason to me. The foundation of them was set as very cunning and resourceful. Yes, they are old and they may think somethings might be impossible but Erohim clearly was outsmarted by Rowan as he was being killed slowly without his knowledge. Not only that, Erohim now knew Rowan was at war with the four reflection, What sort of person can fought them, only someone powerful ans equally cunning or someone that has great backer. It no longer make sense for anyone to underestimate Rowan anymore, it's just bad writing or maybe the author take the easy route to finished the arc.

She said she is a warrior which mean she is not an Esper. What is she doing in nurse attire. Or does she has some special skill?

I see a problem with the action of Erohim and many other powerful character that face Rowan, why the hell does they always underestimate him despite shocking them many times in the back. This is one of big plop if this novel and it's repeated here.

I wonder if Rowan will loose anything or if he will won all his wars with zero loss.

Hahaha. Erohim is Rowan. On what account This is getting interested. if what happened here is right that mean in Jakarr people called him Erohim they never wrong. In a way, I think a Limbo created the current multiverse which PR time and maybe Erohim come to be. If that was the case then, PR Record is more mysterious and powerful than we know as it page might be bring the advent of another Multiverse.

Magnificent chapter.

I know MC is definition of OP but why did he get all the easy stuff. Now you are saying that a Third Dimension is stealing immortal souls and essence from a 9th Dimensional worlds. This negate all kind of hardship and opposition he may face in the future.

The entire was fastpace. I feel like there are a lot of places where it should have been expanded upon. Circe was created to lead rebellion but her work didn't seem to matter at all. There were other things that would have great to know but everything was only mentioned and then left.

This is the best chapter of Andar so far. As someone that is number one mage under the heaven he deserves this kind of arrogance

Finally the king has sat on his rightful Throne.