MrBaskara

2 years ago

Posted

To be honest, there are not a lot of things about your world. The same goes for character design. It's just the occasional line about their shapes and faces. Not much to go with. The story pacing is average I'll say compared to other novels I've read.

Phantom Dragon

Eastern · SteamingCloud

MrBaskara

2 years ago

Posted

Overall this storry is intriguing and good. But a lot of missplelled and missing words. But I do recommend becuase it might get better after a few more chapters.

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MrBaskara

2 years ago

Commented

I think you meant snapped both of his thumbs.

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MrBaskara

2 years ago

Commented

You forgot he “after” when.

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