Well written but description aren't balanced
Is Percy going to pick up every girl with an emotional scar
"Emotions and feelings are complicated. I have faced betrayal and suffering that I brought on myself for falling in love in the past. I was beyond terrified to try for a relationship again, but with Percy it just felt right. He washed away all my concerns being his normal goofy and serious self."
Book&Literature · nutsofthechest
Made
" I heard it was an artwork called Serene Mountain Road, mabe by Long Ming of Eternal Spring Tower."
Eastern · starry8sword
The problem is World building there are to many different types of power measurements and the author is referring to things he never mentioned and he writes a few filer with information that are not so important for the story
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Anime & Comics · Imbreak
What the actual ****!
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Anime & Comics · Imbreak
That was quite impressive as it normally takes months sometimes even years to upgrade one's bloodline from level 1 to 2, but he was about to do it in just day!
Fantasy · DurcalAka
I really appreciate your story
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Fantasy · HideousGrain