I haven't read all the chapters, but I can already see some influence of the books written by Crichton (mutations, evolution), Ludlum (conspiracy, etc.), or Brown (action location). If you add some aviation or vintage cars thread I would be able to add Cussler :D Great job, man!
Wow! You have a great imagination, man (or woman)! You nicely create the world you write about. The plot is interesting. The story is a good read!
Great introduction!
Great chap, but still waiting for more.
The synopsis is written well. You expect to read a reall masterpiece, but... Boom! Not a genre I would normally read. Objectively speaking, the story line is interesting, but there is something missing. I wonder myself what is it? Some kind of lack the lightness? There are places that I feel the text is a bit artificial, even kinda plastic. So definietly there is a place to improve.
Only three chapters, so its difficult to judge the contents. So far the storyline is interesting. I think you have an original style of writing, you build sentences with attention to words. Good work!
Thanks to Marvel's production, Scandinavian mythology is experiencing a real renaissance recently. The figure of Thor, the god of thunder, who is worthy to pick up the hammer of Mjölnir, appeared in comics a long time ago, in the early 1960s (BTW great books). Together with Thor, the comics and films adapted the rest of the Scandinavian pantheon, led by Odin and Loki. Marvel draws handfuls from Nordic beliefs, often simplifying them and adapting them to modern plot patterns, but the world of Asgard is built skillfully and consistently. The Scandinavian mythology is now reached by many authors and their books are very popular. So it is a well-chosen topic.
Autor, please be note, that we use 'scandinavian mitology' instead of 'nordic'
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