Done reading all the chapters , good job🫡😍
I am on mobile and iPad. Some chapters are not in paragraphs
Just make sure that text is in paragraphs and do write the smut
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Sure , send the illustrations
YIn-Yang Primordial Physique
No problem bro. All the best and congratulations for the contract.
F*ck! you cooked bruh. hot as hell. keep it up.
So not the best for me because I am more of a action kind of guy but hear me out. Make paragraphs to be shorter and not big blocks of text. i dont really like the protagionists name and dont really understand the initial proluoge. Try to write less description ad most people just skip them like me . There were moments that I laughed tho so there is that. I only read and wrote due to wanting free passes so dont take it too heart my critisimn . Also good luck and hapoy writing
Finnally he got to know. TFTC tho👍👍
Transmigrated As A Villain, The Heroines Are Also Reborn?
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