KotariValeria

KotariValeria

male LV 3
2020-11-26 入りました United States
バッジ 7

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KotariValeria
KotariValeria
3 years ago
Commented

I love the fact that the system actually went so far as to give him metrics on how likely he was to die with his class' power rating. Really just a perfect touch.

KotariValeria
KotariValeria
4 years ago
Commented

The synopsis compared to this opening make the Goddess' motivation seem a bit different. Here the goddess feels a lot more lax comparatively. not a big deal just a minor difference.

KotariValeria
KotariValeria
4 years ago
Posted

Loving the premise of this and how small actions by the MC really cascade and change the direction of the story. not that far in yet but hoping it stays as strong as the start.

KotariValeria
KotariValeria
4 years ago
Commented

Overall loving this chapter and the leadup to the battle. Just having a hard time keeping track of space and direction in the dungeon. Just thinking along the lines of how he is hearding all these skeletons to the adventurer group and they are not breaking off down other halls. In no way a detriment to the chapter overall just a thought.

KotariValeria
KotariValeria
4 years ago
Posted

Overall liking this series so far. The whole mystery of the dungeon has a nice appeal and is interesting to follow. The only thing I would say comes up in the series that I don't care about too much is the MC's past. There may be something that comes up later on that makes this plot interesting but for now I am happy that it comes up minimally.

KotariValeria
KotariValeria
4 years ago
Commented

These sort of mission start chapters are always satisfying.

KotariValeria
KotariValeria
4 years ago
Posted

Overall I am enjoying the story so far. Its an interesting world an interesting world and it is nice to see how the MC gets himself out of his problems. The main issue I would have is that the initial setting made me think that the MC would be fighting characters at or below his level and barely surviving by the skin of his teeth even though in theory he should completely overpower his foes due to the underpowered class. thus far though, first 100 chapters the MC is still fighting enemies over his level. It is not that much of an issue but I was expecting the perspective to be different. that could all change in the later chapters and it is engaging enough though so I will continue reading to see how it goes.

KotariValeria
KotariValeria
4 years ago
Commented

can't tell from the comments if the page turning gifs are saying that this story is a real page turner or if they just like this newsies section. Either way I agree with both sentiments.

KotariValeria
KotariValeria
4 years ago
Posted

Overall love the story. The characters can be a bit trope-e but they are still humorous. I also love how the story flows overall. not everything is necessarily wrapped up in a neat bow but instead from time to time things are neatly shelved and float around which gives a nice feel for pacing and organic development of plot rather than everything being able to just be resolved and closed up with ease.

KotariValeria
KotariValeria
4 years ago
Commented

I do love this sort of political intrigue. Not saying that the story should become this or anything, as I more expect it to focus on the power and combat, but I do love when things like this are sprinkled in.