The first like 200-300 chapters are absolutely horrible. Every line of the novel is as if Gpt came forward itself and spilled its essence on it. The conversations, useless descriptions and stuff like that would make you cringe more than watching a kid in real life scream that he has a black dragon in his right hand. Everybody in the academy apparently hates mc for no absolute reason and try to bully him. Mc himself is a cold edgy reincarnated adult man in a young body who considers himself as too superior to even talk to others. It did get a bit better in the latest chapters but the author just wastes our time by making 1000 words out of 1.5k words only about descriptions of surroundings and actions taken. He could write 50 lines about a random leaf falling from the sky. In short, I don't recommend reading it.
I could only accept the reality, though I never gave up.
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
No, I typed it all down.
...You have to kill Azariah."
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
Yeah i had misspelled Elara for Isadora
Gerald placed a ghostly hand on Lucavion's shoulder, the touch ethereal and fleeting. "I am entrusting my daughter to you," he said as he looked. "Please look after her if you can."
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
This is sad. Even the old man from Tang family is really old. The Sect leader is middle aged though so I think he can still live for 30-40 years right?
A warm smile blossomed on Hwang Mun-yak's lips, etched with the traces of time.
Fantasy · Euniq
Lmao
If workers demand money or want unnecessary compensation, please report it immediately. We will, quite literally, 'rip them apart'. (x: this is what's handwritten by CM on that flag.)
Fantasy · Euniq
He did dwell on it just now while focusing on this task which requires a lot of concentration.
He didn't dwell on it for even a second, letting all his focus be on the wavering bluish thread that seemed to be on the verge of reaching his mana core.
Fantasy · Hardy1j
Okay buddy I heard what you wanted to say the first time it was mentioned. You don't need to repeat your concerns 10 times to waste our time.
'Surely, I wouldn't hit the roadblock so early on, right?'
Fantasy · Hardy1j
If they're planning to rescue him then why tf will they retract their eyes. Use your common sense and not gpt while typing. No.. nevermind. I don't think gpt can write something as brainless as this. They would keep their eyes on him. Retracting in this case would mean the same as looking away.
Yet they retracted their eyes the next second calmly after feeling that it was time to rescue the ignorant boy who dared to challenge the Elemental Manifestations.
Fantasy · Hardy1j
A waste of your time and more importantly money (if you intend to buy privilege chapters like me). The author makes the mc just 99% of each chapter about some random stuff internally and after doing this for 5 chapters whilst also giving out information dumps every line, he remembers to do 1 single action after which he again starts talking to himself about random unneeded, useless, nonsensical stuff. You're better off not reading this garb*ge novel.
I'm not the guy who wrote 5 chapters for 50 novels and then vanished.
I could only accept the reality, though I never gave up.
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer