why? tell me so i can fix.
Tell me my mistakes I will not fix now but in future maybe.
Spider-Guy
Komik · Mr_Sir_Man
Uneventful chapter. Just tired I will get a longer chapter next time. Thank you
As sunset laminated the streets with orange light. the trash bags sitting in the pool of blood. the homeless man looked at the people with disgust but Peter looked at the sunset and thought what a beautiful world.
Komik · Mr_Sir_Man
Peter snaps at Gwen, "WHAT DO YOU WANT ME TO DO?" Gwen hits Peter on the arm, and he winces, holding his arm in pain.
Komik · Mr_Sir_Man
i don't know if you noticed i am increasing the word count and i plan to make the chapters longer but i need time to getting used to writing
why am I doing this?
Ben reached into his pocket and handed over his wallet. Suddenly, a voice shouted, "Hands up!" The robber panicked and fired a shot. In response, an officer, who had been undercover, fired and shot the robber.
Komik · Mr_Sir_Man
Should I write how I did in the first 3 chapter or was this chapter better
this is not normal american. crime is growing like hell. I will try to show that in the story with more detail next time so there is no confusion.
"Sir, can you state your name and the reason you're here?" the guard asked, his tone professional yet firm, not leaving any room for negotiation.
DC Spider-Man
Komik · Mr_Sir_Man