true grammar is hard at first but your story line is intriguing and well thought out .. I have learned since reading to overlook the grammar and see where your going with it .. the grammar can always be fixed.. in writing you put your thoughts down as they come.. your doing a great job so far as I have read this book you created.. thank you for doing so 😊
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