Thank you a lot for your review. And yeah that was basically my goal, writing a character like Calamitas from Soundless death was definitely the highlight of last year for me, but now I'm trying a different approach, and approach where Vita, the main character, does things on a whim while using maths in the story was definitely a hard choice, but it was fun so I added it.
I hope you liked it :)
This story is absolutely great, do you want great dialogues ? Check Great characters? Check You want a lively world and great world building? Check too For anyone reading this, read it, it is one of the best beginnings to a novel !!!
The plot is great, but that's not the best thing about it... THE AUTHOR IS AN ABSOLUTE LEGEND WHEN IT COMES TO COLD LINES, you would be reading and BOOM, A SUPER COLD LIKE DROPPED AND JUST LIKE THAT YOU ARE NOW EXCITED TO READ WHAT'S NEXT, the description is great too. Overall a great read.
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THANKS A LOT FOR THIS REVIEW AND I WILL WORK HARD ENOUGH TO LIVE UP TO UR EXPECTATIONS!!
Hey, if you like this first chapter I hope you vote add to your library and write a comment cuz it helps a lot !!
Thanks you so much, I did my best and I will try to live up to your expectations about the series :)
THE STORY IS MAGNIFICENT I mean the way you wrote all the chapters was weird and bizarre but like in a good way It was as if I was watching a movie And my favorite chapter is the 4th I mean the confusion in that chapter and the way you show the mc's powers were fantastic I can't even understand how are you so good at describing I literally pictured the scenes in my head and it was quite frightening to be honest
Thanks for pointing out the issue,. I'll work on it :)
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original The Temporary Gift : Only the living get to experience death.
No man died unless he lived, and life is nothing but a temporary gift. Vita, a man who is obsessed with survival understands this better than everyone else, but how much is he willing to go in hopes of maintaining his life. He will make physics from the ground up to make the world building better, he will learn slowly how to go through this world. Yes there is maths, sorry for that, but you can always skip those parts. The story follows a weird way of narration going from 3rd pov to 1st pov in hopes of mixing and crafting unique story that goes into length about the struggles of Vita.6 Chs 3 お気に入り
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Soundless Death
Picture this. All logic seems not to work when I exist. People die suddenly, monsters befriend me, angels try to kill me, and devils as strong as mythology gods want to gain my favor. Who am I, you ask? That's a good question. They call me the beast, but you can call me Soundless Death. I'm a cursed man. My curse is strong enough to kill heroes, knights, and even ancient devils. I don't have full control over it yet, but the moment I do, I will not only become the strongest existence, but I will be able to become the most feared creature of all time.12 Chs 22 お気に入り
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How to Become an Apex Being
What if you knew about the existence of energy and that the energy inside a human body can destroy a whole country if properly used(or should I say improperly), and that you can find loopholes in the body to use that energy, what would you have done ? This is the story of our MC, Achraf. A guy on the road to becoming an APEX. An independent existence, that can live without needing anything in this universe. Of course, the story isn't all about him. All the characters have a certain depth to their character and aren't just NPCs. And the story is gonna be a multilayered story with a lot of characters roaming around the world. It's my first time writing a novel, so if you have any remarks feel free to use the comment section to express those thoughts. *Warning* I use multiple POVs to make the story more interesting. The power system is logical and it has an origin, but you won't know the origin till later in the story.7 Chs 13 お気に入り
I will return to this sometime next month
Soundless Death
Fantasy · MHK_