Grammer, spelling, and character design need to improve. Great 👍 Novel
I was about your early work compared to your newest novels. Pretty Good. Now I feel the improvement of your newest novels was great, but u suck at character desighs.
Very good read. I'm not usually a fan of OMA novels but this was a great read. THANK YOU
I stop at chapter 1. The way the main chapter became a girl gave to many red flags. I see it easily him turning back into a guy in later chapter not risking it. Yuri only
Great story but towards the unnecessary sadness I even had to skips some chapters just to sad HAVE A ❤️
Not enough detail about the character. Like age, height, eye color, height, breast size, and clothing.
Nice! it rare I finish a novel start to finish. I'll definitely check out your other work.😭😭
it's just little too dark from me. Like she keep falling in love with the same girl but different person. Just sad hardly romance material
why don't you decried the character looks more often? I have hard time picturing what any of the characters looks physically Story is unique and have a nice flow. Thanks
spelling, and grammar is bad I hope the bovel doesn't get any more sexually darker than it is. Love the main character and main Heroine
The Mysterious Villainess: My Journey To Be Strongest
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