Karil

Karil

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Imagine a beautiful world where you can do anything you want... Now dip it in sh#t. This is where we live.

2020-10-17 入りました Poland
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Moments 670
Karil
Karil
6 months ago
Commented

We all know this feeling all to well. When your life turned upside down so quickly that your only response is to acclimate quickly. To fundamentally change as a person even before you fully matured. And if you haven't felt that yet. Be happy that you have a good life. Be grateful. Someone always has it worse than you.

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It was almost like all of this hadn't happened.

Kill the Sun

Kill the Sun

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Karil
Karil
6 months ago
Commented

Time to spend a hefty sum on sudden death precautions!

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"I remember that there are also some low-level passive spells that can slightly increase toughness…"

A Necromancer Who Just Wants to Plant Trees

A Necromancer Who Just Wants to Plant Trees

Games · The Key In 10 Years

Karil
Karil
6 months ago
Commented

Beautiful.

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Second. Live freely, be true to yourself, and cherish the bonds of family that tie us together. That's the whole point, right?

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

Karil
Karil
6 months ago
Commented

The will of the whole colony.

Though of course, such submission is impossible when a stronger will is already in place.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

Karil
Karil
6 months ago
Commented

Domain expansion.

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The Well spreads out to cover a kilometre in all directions within an instant.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

Karil
Karil
6 months ago
Commented

This here kids, is what we call foreshadowing.

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All I did was create a gravity well with the highest amount of mana, which I condensed to the highest point and then pumped it full of energy from the Altar. What could possibly happen?

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

Karil
Karil
7 months ago
Commented

Awwwww. The demons are cute.

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Not that these demons are likely to submit. I don't know what it is that their 'god' is doing to them, but they have gone completely loco. The intelligent, obsession-focused monsters are gone, replaced by these slavering hounds, desperate to enact his will. It's depressing if I'm honest. The demons might be a bit nuts most of the time, but I like them. They're weird.

Chrysalis

Chrysalis

Fantasy · RinoZ

Karil
Karil
7 months ago
Replied to Guiltythree

No, thank you for creating this masterpiece! Is there any chance you have a discord server for your readers?

Karil
Karil
8 months ago
Posted

Literally just an overcomplicated story about Thesius with a lot of Xianxia plot points and horrors mixed inbetween. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. There are a lot of grammatical errors after chapter 900 but at this point you will be too hooked on reading this piece of art. Oh and also "Lord of the misteries" readers will get their PTSD triggered when reading this. Especially when it comes to the description of the moon. Most of, if not all the characters have depth to them, even the side characters. It updates regularly. The worldbuilding and story development are top notch although the beggining of the antarctica arc is taxing on the mind. This story gets a solid 9/10 from me.

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Karil
Karil
10 months ago
Posted

A great story with nice pacing. The worldbuilding is well thought out and It's a great take on getting the all powrful "system" cliché. The character lacks the trauma needed for character building but has enough of it to get more powerful. I suggest the author should take some pointers from "Supreme Magus" if they want to get better at that. The story points out from the start that our main character Isn't the biggest fish out there and won't be for a long time which i like. There are few grammatical errors that could be fixed by using a program made for that or by having someone review the chapters before publicationMy personal rating is 7.5/10overall, a great story.

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