AbsoluteOblivion

For the writing quality I would constantly notice, errors or use of the wrong word, although in the later chapters the inconsistencies are less frequent, they still appear every now and then. For the updating stability I feel like its quite good, at the time of making this review its 8 chapters a week, so thats an 5/5 from me. For story, I know this kind of thing is kinda cliche but its the little things that hook me, like the MC,s system acting uncharacteristicly human, or the fact the MC worrying about the return of the big bad, but at the same time not worrying at all. For character development, I like how the MC is still themself but also more due to their situation they were put in, and at times they decided to act against the original personality I had attuned the them, and for the other characters as well seem to be developing their own personalities, although its a little obvious in some places, maybe going into the back story of other side characters and adding more depth to their inner self I could find some attachment to them, but right now their all acting as characters like them are expected. For world development, I like how there is seemingly more societies that utilize their own system, as well as the fact as governments trying to monopolize a new power and people treating it like they use to weapons, it really adds to how humans are still gonna act the same way even if they don’t understand it. All in all I do like this story and find the writers work out standing.