The vocabulary and grammar seems to be fluid, but the story lacks that life that characters should have, for a story about time i find it ironic that there is almost no time perception, we dont know dates, we dont know time skips, everything is happening in one long day with no breaks but substantial amount of activity, i love the idea of a character similar to Wanda but Time stone affected h instead, its just the execution of how you're pacing this story is all over the place, and Ethan just doesn't have Thoughts, i want to know whats going on in his head, but its never fully explained why he is doing what hes doing, it just seems like the timeline for the novel is all over the place with no perception on how long anything is going to take or going to be.
breaking it down?
It may be hard to actually understand, but breaking it down, there were at least six ways it could be used.
Omniscience in Marvel
Movies · Josh_Richie
11
Level: 13 (161,700/204,800 EXP)
Shadow Monarch in Tensura
Anime & Comics · TheRandomMe
not to Dudley at this point in time, he was a frail kid who would get beat up by dudley and his friends and if he did anything to dudley, petunia and vernon would most likely starve him
Harry seemed to shrink at the boys presence and words and looked at Nick with teary eyes expecting him to agree with his cousin like everyone seems to. This didn't happen however as instead Nick stared Dudley in the eyes without restraining his magic making the boy recoil in instinctive fear. "How so?" Nick asked calmly and clearly without any emotion at all. Dudley froze at the question as his atrophied brain cells tried to find an answer but he could only spew out "Because my parents said so!" angrily trying to justify himself. "I didn't ask what your parents said...." Nick intensified his magical pressure on the boy "I asked how he was a freak." he said coldly.-
Harry potter: The ringmaker
Book&Literature · loskro
parrots=People fr
"Umm..so how exactly did I die? And also who are you, sir..?" I wasn't really sure if I called this person? If this being is even considered as such, but anyway they look like a person, but I can't determine which gender they are.
Multiversal: The Shop
Anime & Comics · Charlottes
people who said this book was boring are only reading books for OP characters who completely alter the world around them, this fanfic has character development and amazing story arcs, it has subtle hints to the future and seemingly in depth planning, its a proper story, so good job author
if eli somehow got this into hela's system would she then lose her powers and be susceptible to magic?
Maya, or Barb now, had finished Extremis for Asgardians. However, it turned out, that the variant she had created would strip him of his magical blood. Since it was magic and science, they didn't come to a scientific explanation. Only that his connection to magic would be used up by Extremis as a different kind of energy. Eli didn't like the trade off, so he didn't take the Asg-Extremis.
What if... Thor had a son? (MCU AU)
Movies · Nuclide
probably dead or imprisoned because she worked with Grindelwald
He met Jacob Kowalski, Newt Scamander and his wife Porpentina Goldstein, who gifted him a customized briefcase with a lab and room inside, Beauxbatons Professors (Madame Maxime included), and Thomas Dupont, the French Minister for Magic.
HP: The Legendary Arithmancer
Book&Literature · Stormeyy
i believe English isn't their first language, so some words will not translate correctly
The Gringotes Witch Bank.
Harry Potter : Ancient Magic
Book&Literature · Guryon
cliffhanger >:(
Fist Of Haki
Anime & Comics · Passerby_Venne