Albrich

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2020-10-09 入りました Germany
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Albrich
Albrich
9 months ago
Commented

Author, please update the story !!! It is to good to be dropped!

Albrich
Albrich
1 years ago
Replied to AngelLily

I thought they are Vampires; why can they shift into dragons? Is there a story I should have read before?

"I see you went to visit that blind, useless brother of yours. What did you tell him?" He questioned her, and Leia, who was disgusted to the core, spat on him, causing Logan to quickly draw his head back.

A Vampire’s Caregiver

A Vampire’s Caregiver

Fantasy · AngelLily

Albrich
Albrich
1 years ago
Commented

I don‘t know how many times it was already mixed up, but ‚bought‘ is paar tense of ‚to buy‘. The past tense of ‚to bring‘ is ‚brought‘.

It was said that a long time ago the demon race invaded the world. They had managed to take over the Dying Isle Continent along with 2 other continents that were near the Dying Isle continent. At that time, the entire world was said to have bathed in chaos. The invasion of a foreign race had bought all the races in this world together.

Dragon Monarch System

Dragon Monarch System

Urban · Dark_Bangali

Albrich
Albrich
1 years ago
Commented

Very good Story so far. Should you finish the book AND publish it (as a printed Version), I would buy it!

Albrich
Albrich
1 years ago
Commented

Will there be another chapter? If yes: When?

Albrich
Albrich
2 years ago
Commented

„Tires of friendship“? What does this mean?

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Aether Beasts

Aether Beasts

Fantasy · I_S_Rift

Albrich
Albrich
2 years ago
Commented

I have a question. Amon has gained about 10 levels in a matter of months. How can it be that he only has about 30 levels when he must have trained at least 7 years with his grandparends?

Albrich
Albrich
2 years ago
Commented

To be honest, I liked your previous Version better. It had a mysteriousness to it. And you could still use their past as an explanation, why Sylvan likes her. (For Example: You could have used, him finding a picture of them to make him remember) But it probably would have been harder to continue the story so the change is understandable. Either way your story is fantastic! I await your next chapter!

Albrich
Albrich
2 years ago
Commented

Already did it!!! Can‘t be sure yet (till now there are only 4 Chaptors), but I think it is going to be as amazing as this book!!! Keep up the good work ! I love it!

I am here with another request for you. Please can you guys read a new story called "We Don't Fall In Love". It's an urban love story and I will be super grateful if you guys could leave reviews and comments. It's really important that you give stars and reviews, so I hope that you do.

Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen

Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen

Book&Literature · Mystical_Snowflake

Albrich
Albrich
3 years ago
Commented

Finally! Welcome back author! Thanks for the new chapter!