I have read the story a bit. I liked that you didn't made the FL a dumb. But how she follows her instincts. I don't know more since i just reading it.
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Well I don't know it's make me feel numb in my head. I don't know why. Very different style of writing. Needed to read it again. i would appreciate if you make it a bit easier to understand.
Well it's a bit different story or book than we usually. It's my First time reading this kind of book. I don't know i felt a bit numb and I tried to understand it. I will definitely tried to read it . Since i only have read two chapters. ✌️👍👌
Well This story line is cute and it's sweet like FL to try to get attention in the synopsis. When I read it to downstairs than it's after break up story. Usually not fan of this kind of book but why not try something new. 🤭🥰 it's looking kawaii overall.
Thanks for letting me know. I will try it break it more into small paragraphs.
It's a good storyline. I just read this book about some chapters. I will read it completely in some time but it is developing well till now. So I hope you will continue to write it.
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Thankyou so much for letting me know . I will try to improve it.
He such a cutie 😍🤩🥰
Ok, Thankyou
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