shadow_serpent

20 days ago

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"Forcing the doctor"??

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shadow_serpent

23 days ago

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*plague

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shadow_serpent

23 days ago

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at the*

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shadow_serpent

23 days ago

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ran*

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shadow_serpent

23 days ago

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hire*

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shadow_serpent

23 days ago

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caught not "catched"

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shadow_serpent

23 days ago

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get not "went"

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shadow_serpent

24 days ago

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"fired" not "fried" and "get" instead of "getting"

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shadow_serpent

1 months ago

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"with" not "win"

Now that she had been cured, he wouldn't need the identity as Ghost anymore. This served its purpose and win the Family head of the Gates family looking for him, it would only be a matter of time before those skilled enough would link him and Ghost together if Ghost were to appear once more.

Taking It All From The Protagonist

Fantasy · Averagewrites

shadow_serpent

1 months ago

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I feel like if there is yandere then harem is automatically not happening. it goes against the term. just my opinion tho-

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Isekai Ascension

Fantasy · Astral_Pandemonium