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Anime & Comics · InGlorious
Nick and Nat feel so hollow in this writing and your constants get mixed but the Symbiote has a proper direction the only thing to reveal is how you take in battle scenes, dialogue emotions, and how he/they react to such situations overall improve and conquer keep up the good fight of dieing literature [img=recommend]
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Good idea, keep up the great work
It looks good for the first two chapters. I just hope it's an OP character, he deserves it. And make sure you have your time management down unlike me
This book is is Beautiful in its telling and doesn't hold back in its description of gore and death with emotions. keep it up so I can give power stones
The character is perfect, backstory has a perfect setup, the only mistake I see is the him/her mix up other wise keep the chapters coming and you'll be rolling in power stones soon
Thank you for your time in writing this book and shall you drown in power stones
have fun and good chapter
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