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Last few chapters were a little bit weird but at the same time it's getting me wonder why do we need that info in plot. Does it change something or doesn't matter at all. Is it corrupted place or we have a demon's party in town.

Same characters, new chapter, new vibe

Guard is making her move. I think its a good plot twist, some passive action makes different vibe.

So far, I have a positive impression of the work, but let me give you some advice. It will be good if you give a plausible explanation why the Demon Lord does not want demons to walk on the earth. The first, not everyone has read your other work, and the second, this will greatly help in the development of the plot logic. Because some demons look like pacifist warriors or bees fighting honey.

This is not so much a braindead or dumb hero, but too naive. I think the main problem that mc is is like a hostage of "circumstances". In the begining, the hero did something, now he is only reacts, and does not act. Even when "playing" with partners, he gives the initiative. It's not bad in itself, but too ordinary life. "You are a hero not because you have strength, but because you make decisions and take responsibility."

It seems the name for the skill is too patriarchal. More suitable for declaring control over an area than a form of marriage.

Huntington family growing quickly.

After "finish him", i got the some kind of deja vu. It's th like Mortal Kombat phrase. About plot, i think author gave to many girls to mc from the start and relationships between them couldn't develop the same speed as reader expect to be. So we had a feeling that mc is too slow.

Pretty nice chapter. Soft and purr. But cat-girl as tank class character? Not ranger, rough or sped based class. Interesting, uncommon.

Let's be honest, this story doesn't have any mind-blowing plot twist, but... hey, does anybody remember the title of this novel? Like, we've read about some epic exp grind... both aspects of it (you know what I mean ;). Any new skills for mc, some progress, etc?

The best of it is that she keeps in mind the other girl needs and feelings. That's what makes her a good partner.

Some students aren't meant to be tamed, some of them could turn into a strict teacher. Very bad teacher.

Does made-cafe have that kind cringe staff? And where the hell our Celia lost her brother complex? It's rare to see that someone is so friendly with a stranger who's flirting with your date. Is there some kind of spell or something?

Too many demon hunters in this town. I mean, how many DH for 100k citizens? If they're people then shall be money in their pockets. They have equipment, costs and etc. And yes, by now all DH are young and pretty people. Are they hiring them in model agencies?

expect exp expand

Pretty good chapter with fresh interesting game. Though I have no idea what the dice game is in real life, this have a quick pace and random quest from cards. That's give maximum atantion to "action" rather than game itself.

Nice chapter, but two drinks is a little bit strange. He is in demon form so he must have better alcohol tolerance. And more of that his race and body weight are the main thing. Historically north people drunk a lot of strong alcohol, they've developed tolerance, and build a culture of drinking, when you drink to taste some flavour, relax, let yourself lose control and feel freedom. Drinking as competition is so useless, in the end you'll find yourself drunk as f*ck with no pleasure, feeling like a sh*ty sh*t next morning. Don't do that. Drink for your own pleasure not to prove something.

Wait a minute. Blindfold, twin sister (diamond), something dirty are going happen. These tentacle monsters (not they appearence, but they naughty minds) trying to fool pretty lamia, and innocent, humble incubus demon. [img=recommend]

For some reason I have a feeling that without some kind of doppelganger our mc'll have 24/7 busy schedule. Even with all that power, it's too troublesome to meet all his partners one by one. Yeah mia, pearl and diamond are formed in one squad, but Olivia + her mother + Emma + sister + foxy... and will be more. See it's hard just to remember all the names, not saying about plot twists. That's dilemma.

Imagine. Hey, sis, I've found a pet on my way home. Her name is Foxy and she's going to live with us for some time. Yeah, yeah, I'll feed, clean, play with her. No worries. Almost no loud noises, just some screaming and moans, when I'll be playing with her. By the way what do you think about girls with animals ears, tails?