Nice chapter like always! Would be happy if u were interested in writing a Doulou Dalu fanfiction, would be interesting how you write something like that.
I don´t think it would be a great Idea to give Huo Yuhao the ability to "revive" the Soul beasts to let them fight for him Because? cons- - The other Humans would want to know HOW he did it (Kidnapping etc. torture even if he is at shrek he won´t get protected.) -Imagine Da Tian (The 1 million dragon) would knew of that.. OOf. - He is not even the MC of the Story so why try to power him up? Pros - In the early stages of the Fanfiction it would be "Great?" that he has someone to protect him. In the end I dont really see anything good in it to give him the Ability. Nice chapters till now waiting for new chapters!
Inu was the nickname when Kakashi was in Anbu Good chapter!
Not a bad choice with the Wishes but.. Remember its the Akame ga kill world.. A Dragon bloodline? Really? He wouldn´t really need to train to get the strongest.. And the Intelligence of Lelouch? He would literally destroy EVERYTHING.. It would be alright.. For lets say Naruto you could nerf the Bloodline a bit with the intelligence you could really get much and it would be really exciting to read something like that but in Akame ga kill where the Strongest is like a elite jonin to kage lvl in Naruto? I think it wouldn´t suit. Clearly, I thought something like Gamer´s mind.. But I though that would already be way too OP.. Maybe I think that the Akame ga kill world is a bit too weak.. But im not perfect *_*
This Akame ga kill work is going to be of the side of the Empire.. I thought it would be clearly after I wrote the Chapters unly now. That "Talent" That you speak of, is the Talent to kill without any hesitation do you think one of our world who lived a "Normal" Life would do it without hesitation? Really? I appreciate your comment because it really helped me.. But I thought many things would be clear and on the thing in Akame ga kill would what would happen when I make him OP? Ahh right, he would maybe in your sense of OPness being stronger than Esdeath.. I think it would be clear that the Fanfiction would be predictable as ****.. So I thank you for your comment, but yep its my first Fanfiction I acknowledge that there are many problems in it.. Example he was 21 in his old world means he is now 37 and still isn´t the brightest one of all of them..
You know.. He has the talent but that doesn´t mean no one else has it.. Most of them have the Talent, Akame,Poney,Gin and the other Enemys. If not they wouldn`t be in the Elite team^^ I just gave him the Talent to get into the Team to be stronger and I dont want to make him stronger then Esdeath EVER. It would just break the entire Story. Because if I make him stronger then Esdeath, how will the Revolutionary army even have a chance to win?
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Maybe you could do it in the 2 years time skip where Luffy trains his Haki where he sees that he changes his attitude
I think he changes too fast imagine you were a slave for your whole life and after 10 days you change? P.S Good chapter
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original Akame Ga Kill -The Wish
Hiro dies and has the choice to Reincarnate in Akame Ga Kill with 3 wishes of his choice20 Chs 1k お気に入り
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Reincarnation in Naruto world with the Dark-Release
Ichigawa Shiro died and he has a screen before his Eyes to make his choice to reincarnate or life on a planet in peace...1 Chs 7 お気に入り
Great Chapter like always :D
Is this the famous Reincarnation? Rewrite
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