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semangat terus Thor dalam berkarya, ceritanya membuat penasaran, eh ini karya pertama yah untuk Female Lead [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

in terms of story, plot and so on, it's good, but in terms of writing, it needs a little improvement, especially the point of view used. the rest is worthy of a contract 😁😁

the idea of ​​the story is very good and makes the reader curious, it's just the way of writing that makes it confusing. need to pay attention again to the writing thor