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Well , his heart skill should give him a boost to his element affinité , and the other a reduction to the other spicies animosity. I'm glad you choose to make him better at using his element , I alway through it was strange that he wasn't able to do anything with it before meeting sensei , when other were able to use their element at least at the basic level
ch 22 22 GREEN GUARDIAN
Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)
Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_
So its the regular beast taper class , was thinking of the rare class of the twin from the previous version. Anubis is more in tune with the spectral wolf than fenrir I think. Happy to see thats a whole new novel , scared to see the same story with some tweak for more than 500 chaps . Thx for the chap as always
ch 16 16 ASTRAL GREENWOOD
Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)
Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_
A monstruous snake ineed
The week felt longer with a broken wrist. Claude couldn't do his usual fitness and training. He had to adjust. He had to ease up— conserve his energy, for what was to come. He even started dreaming about monstrous armored snakes with bladed whips for tails and poisonous iron-chunk swords for teeth. He'd never had to conserve his energy before.
Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)
Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_
there she is , my beloved black spear
On his way out he heard the Gold Ranker ask to buy DuskBringer….
Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)
Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_
there is something that bothers me with Emir, something that means that I cannot just hang on with him, he was created with the aim of being a weapon and has been training since his birth, therefore his mind and his abilities are justified. Maybe it comes from his opponents just not being strong enough, or something else. I just have the impression that they can overpower anything at this point, look at the fight with the salamander it's what you could call a close fight but yet I never had the impression that he was going to lose. Maybe that's just it, I don't feel like he can lose?
ch 111 Spell Weaver II
OLD-WORLD EXTRA
Sci-fi · GoldenStache
thats what was bothering me. You clearly wrote emir with flaw , but I just dont feel them in any fight . He never make any mistake with his Time ability , can responsable to any situation with is ability (can fight long , close range , now he can even protect himself). Lack of experience ? he can bypass this with his ability, . He's often "close to death" but I never feels as if he can lose à fight. He just feel too strong and perfect in the way he fight. Thats just the impression he is giving me. And his lack of "personality?" with his lack of any error make him just feel like an inorganic being.I just dont have any attachement to him. Actually the scenes that i like the most are the on with his family , when they are some devellopement for him.
ch 111 Spell Weaver II
OLD-WORLD EXTRA
Sci-fi · GoldenStache
I finally understand what bother me so much with this novel, I never feel like there is a danger , i never feel atached to any character , Émir feel just to perfect no mistake in any action , no hésitation just power blazing any obstacle. after so many chap I finally know why I can't get into it . Émir just feel inorganic ,à perfect being with anecdotic flaw who tremple any opposent
ch 111 Spell Weaver II
OLD-WORLD EXTRA
Sci-fi · GoldenStache
The man was a humanoid bunny. He was 2 meters tall, had pink fur, wore an eyepatch, and smoked a cigar. His rogue appearance, coupled with his frown and bulging muscles, made him stick out from the group.
Game's Villain Is The Evil Clown
Sci-fi · TheCringeGuy
"Name, Class, and Power Level?"
Game's Villain Is The Evil Clown
Sci-fi · TheCringeGuy
like him ?
He set Elwin down onto a safe spot on the falcon's nest. Elwin tiptoed to peer his head above the wooden railing, his tangerine, cream-colored hair fluttering in the wind.
Aeternitas: The Shores of Destiny
Fantasy · Toshinori_Heiichi
A hypocrite ineed after all isn't he just like Arthur a pawn in the order's hands
ch 91 Awoken From Lies
OLD-WORLD EXTRA
Sci-fi · GoldenStache
See ? Another convenient , maybe some god of charm bless the MC ?
Without further ado, the owner reluctantly agreed to my terms, and I handed him the money. As he scurried away, I felt my laughter rising within me, unchecked and unhinged.
A World Unwritten
Fantasy · QTV
why it is so easy à complete stranger comme to you saying sweet things and poof à connection is created. Its just feel way to easy for the MC till now how he gain the sword was easy , how he gain the thief was easy. I will continue with 5 or 6 chapters but it just feel way too convenient for now
As he inspected it, a maniacal laugh erupted from him. "Alright, this is going to be fun! I'm in. Those greedy nobles are going to go insane once it spreads. So why do you need me?"
A World Unwritten
Fantasy · QTV
It just feel forced , you cant vient him as your savior when your survival is due to luck and when they had à chance to win without this plan. And just why ? why doesn't he just escape with his team this plan was just to dangerous when you can just prepare à secret escape route
"But that leader wanted to claim my rewards, while these were innocent and fought following every order, even if it cost them their lives. For this, I won't kill them," Lucius explained as he opened the door of the shaman's house and closed it behind him. Deep down, he felt a bit of sorrow as he saw their faces, but on the other hand, he was also their savior.
Worldshift A New Beginning.
Fantasy · Crown_Nyx
why ? Sword and shield is just better even if you don't know how to use the shield just discard it and you have a sword and a shield that can be of use.
["You have picked the longsword," the voice confirmed, its tone resolute].
Worldshift A New Beginning.
Fantasy · Crown_Nyx
S you can gain à sigil by eating à sigil bearer
ch 38 Me, Myself, and Dreams
Tread Lightly: Among Monsters And Men
Action · Broken_Saint
now that I think about it , I was thinking maybe his sigil is too overpowered, but if he need 1 month for recover it's balanced
The Philosopher. Sounds like a Sigil for thinking and learning. It most certainly is not. But with how much Wyatt gets hurt, it definitely gets him thinking. Thinking about pain and suffering. Especially when the most potent ability from his Sigil basically cripples him for a month. It's already been around two weeks since he was initially hurt by that ability. I wonder how much longer it will take until he fully recovers.
Tread Lightly: Among Monsters And Men
Action · Broken_Saint
Hope he learn something frome this
Billy shrugged, "Well, when things are too easy, they get boring. By acting dumb, I introduce an element of unpredictability, of chaos. It's far more exciting, don't you think?"
Anything but an Extra
Action · IEatTurtles
where did she get her scythe ? she manage to keep from the begenning ? But even Samuel didnt manage to get a weapon just a broken shield
Claude looked up from the two young warriors. Behind them, Naz hopped down from the jungle cliffs and into the sandy beaches they occupied. She looked relaxed. Arms rested on the giant black metal scythe rested over the back of her shoulders as she walked over to them.
Beasts: Reborn (REVAMPED)
Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_