An impressive start and plot as well as smooth and fluid writing. The author has a way with words which makes the state of mind of the characters to be felt very clearly. As a fan of transmigration/reincarnation stories, I am definitely adding this to my library!
Wow. Already deeply enraptured from the start, I would say
A very lovely story. The plot and story development is looking good so far and I hope it continues to do so. But I do think that the author needs to make use of more punctuations. As both a reader and writer, I have discovered that punctuations does a great deal of making stories easier to read. o.
If there was ever such a selfish sister in this world, I think it will be a ton better to be a orphan. Why does Elesha has to sacrifice her own happiness and dreams for her just so she could be with her 'true love'?
She should have listened to her mom's words and stayed away from eating what her grandmother gave her<sighs>
As someone who has a phobia for reptiles especially the one the author wrote about, it took everything in me to read this but the strange thing was I still felt like continuing reading after ending every chapter. I think that tells a lot about how good the story is. The author is also really good with descriptions so except for the grammatical mistakes here and there, everything is pretty good enough - the world background, character design, story development and all others.
A very compelling and intriguing story, I would say. Not to mention that the three dimensional character of the ML makes the story more immersive, the mystery in-between the words also makes the story a page turner.
A gem, I would say. With every chapter, the mystery deepens and calls for your spirit of exploration. I really would like to know if Rowan really became seafoam green or... Anyways, I recommend it 💯☑️
The flow of the story I have to say is very fluid and even from the start, I am already getting enough 'sweet' vibes from Vienna, our FL and Leon, who is hopefully the Ml. A great work I would recommend to anyone who wants just the right dose of romance in their books.
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original The Supermodel's Ex- Fiance
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Supermodel Nina and the heir to the multi billionaire W Corps have been involved since their university days. Once hailed as the most popular couple in the university, the pair's love was deeply moving. Many wished to experience a love like theirs and those who did prayed to last like them. But life wasn't always a bed of roses because a year to their wedding, a cruel twist of fate threatens to pull the lovers apart. Will their love triumph in the end or would they end up losing this love that came once in a lifetime? Do find out in The Supermodel's Ex-Fiance!!1 Chs 23 お気に入り
I am glad you enjoyed it! You can check out my other book 'Mr Devilish's Substitute Bride' as well. Thank you so so much for the review❤️
The Supermodel's Ex-Fiancé
Urban · Lazy_Authoress