darksoul_666

darksoul_666

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darksoul_666
darksoul_666
2 years ago
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how's your exam going

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Fantasy · The_Aegis

darksoul_666
darksoul_666
3 years ago
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darksoul_666
darksoul_666
3 years ago
Commented

how does purity of the bloodline works. wasn't it less than 0.001%. how did she got 10% to her. suggestions I don't personally dislike info dump. it just need some space between info dumps. and unique terms make it hard to follow the story. just with generic term some times.and introduce more characters.

darksoul_666
darksoul_666
3 years ago
Commented

some of us like info dump and rpg stuff. it just need to be more connected to the current phase of the story to not feel artificial or forced to the story. taking it slow always make it interesting when half of the stuff is still mysterious. thanks for the story.

darksoul_666
darksoul_666
3 years ago
Commented

I like the story so far. but it feels like your forcing to much detail and world building in each chapter. having unique terms and complicated monetary system isn't always a good thing it just makes it hard to follow the story.but I'm loving the story so far. thanks for the chapter

darksoul_666
darksoul_666
3 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter.

darksoul_666
darksoul_666
3 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter. and how can one be the god of honour and deception.lol

darksoul_666
darksoul_666
3 years ago
Commented

I have yet to read other book of yours. so I go with First option

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darksoul_666
darksoul_666
3 years ago
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thanks for the chapter

darksoul_666
darksoul_666
3 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter