UrsoNadador

Finally a worthy story about Arcane! Keep writing this masterpiece (I need more chapters). The plot development was a bit jarring, but it's a direction I'm excited to follow. My thanks to the Author!

Congratulations to the author of the fanfic! The fanfic is just perfect to read. The construction of the MC is brilliant in my opinion, a kind of neutral chaotic, a simple human with a good head on his neck and who is fortunate enough to be in the right "universe", at the right time and with the right resources. hahahah I look forward to the next chapters! Um grande abraço para o autor!

It was sublime from start to finish. Thank you so much author for allowing us to read such a good fanfic! I never got bored following Quinn West, I hope to read more about him in the future. A hug to the author! P.S. I look forward to finding out who got his wand.

Damn it! It was better than the original hahahaha. I say this because I read the whole novel and honestly I couldn't stand Rudeus's personality, for me the mana catastrophe leaves a very bitter taste in my mouth, because despite being very important to the plot, it ends up destroying (In the case of canonical) things that were absurdly important to me, such as family dynamics and the exploration of the fittoa region, which was very picturesque. I hope the author can continue to write, I look forward to continuing to read the story. Thanks for writing this fanfic!

(small spoiler) Zaos accepted his bastard sister, because he understands that it's not her fault, but he has a lot of resentment from his father for betraying his mother. Lyra had a very big shock which in turn ended up impacting her health (which was already fragile). The development is much more complex, I tried to give a summary of this part of the story, I guarantee that the end will leave you very shaken. Happy reading my friend!

I'm sorry I didn't quite understand your question (English is not my mother tongue, I may be failing in the translation since I use the help of Google Translate), when you refer to the half-sister you are talking about the second daughter of Zaos' father ?

The story is very good to read! I'm looking forward to the next chapters with enthusiasm. Thanks for the content author, keep up the good work. I hope Lord Vader is truly powerful.

The author is to be congratulated, the story is very good to read! Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapters. As a fan I wanted him to team up with Padmé as their separation in canon is very sad. I'm sure the author will get the plot right.

There is no Harem, these female characters are important for the development of Zaos. Of course, in the end he ends up having a love relationship with just one woman, although at first I thought he would end up having a romance with the princess.