Thanks for letting me know about the grammatical error, I didn't intend to put 'square' there.
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My Demonic Contract
Fantasy · Ribblood
He had gained his intelligence stats before gaining mana so the mana wasn't increased.
[Mana: 10/10 -> 125/125]
My Demonic Contract
Fantasy · Ribblood
Thanks for letting me know about that tag, I didn’t even see it last time. I don’t want to spoil too much but there will be a big chapter gap between each tradgy event. So you won’t need to worry about another one anytime soon.
I’m glad you are enjoying the novel so far. I do try my best with grammar and such as I have read too many good novels get ruined in such a way. My writing can also improve, such as giving a better description of the surroundings so the readers can easily imagine what is happening within the text. There will be more tradgy but I won’t be throwing it willy nilly. For there to be happy moments, there must always be despressing moments to give weight to the happy ones.
I’m glad that it was able to catch you off guard; death comes when you least expect it. There will be more tragedy as some characters you have seen and haven’t seen may *ahem* meet their demise. This gives weight to the characters and their actions.
Thanks for letting me know.
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My Demonic Contract
Fantasy · Ribblood
I am glad you are enjoying the novel so far. If there is anything you think I can improve on don't be afraid to let me know.
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original My Demonic Contract
If you could gain power, wealth, or prestige, but at the price of your soul, would you accept the deal? Humanity continues on to day-to-day life, oblivious of the supernatural creatures that lurk in the dark. Being attacked by one of these creatures, Jayce Price was given a choice, sell his soul or die as a human, picking one of the options, multiple messages appeared in front of him. [ You have acquired the System ] [ Current Demonic Synchronization 0.00% ] [ Increasing Demonic Synchronization ] --- Author here, As this is my first ever novel I would appreciate constructive criticism to help improve the quality of the novel. Hoping to improve the quality as I write more so please feel free to state your opinions on the matter. It would be most appreciated if you could support my novel in any way you can, every contribution toward a goal is valuable, regardless of how small it may be. Also, special thanks to J.G. for the artwork! Contact me through Discord or Email for any questions: Ribblood#3222 Ribblood2@gmail.com286 Chs 1.5k お気に入り
The healing potions only heal non-fatal wounds but I went ahead and fixed it. Thanks for mentioning it.
My Demonic Contract
Fantasy · Ribblood