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Very good, thank you for the Chapter, the chapter is only short for such a good fanfiction.

Thanks for the chapter. He should learn shadow clone, even if it's not to train but to study and gain more knowledge for research.

I think this fanfiction is really cool, I hope it continues to update at this rate.

"I also enjoy 'slice of life,' but the story primarily revolves around his relationships with the girls. And every time an opportunity arises for him to engage with some important characters from the main cast, he simply flees and acts like a coward. It's not enjoyable if the plot continues in this pattern of constant dragging. And I hope there's more action involving Akeno, because it's not just about drama and action, but about him overcoming his cowardice. It's noteworthy how he can't even interact with the members of his own nobility when Serafall is around, even though his relationship with his nobility predates his marriage to Sona. It's not as if anyone expected him to stop interacting with his own nobility, even though it was previously stated that he's confident in having a good chance of defeating Serafall in a confrontation. However, I don't believe it would come to a confrontation."

Bell-mère is also beautiful and hasn't been mentioned at all. It would be interesting if he suddenly started mentioning her and she managed to obtain the reward in the end. I would be surprised, not only the sisters, but all the others who have the diary. I think it would be interesting to see their reaction when they realize that a deceased person can also win the reward. And I say he should discover the diary. Bell-mère cannot be resurrected, and he doesn't know about it. An ignorant protagonist about a subject closely related to him leaves a very unpleasant feeling while reading, especially something as significant as the resurrection of a character. And he must be there to court her when she resurrects.

Bell-mère is also beautiful and hasn't been mentioned at all. It would be interesting if he suddenly started mentioning her and she managed to obtain the reward in the end. I would be surprised, not only the sisters, but all the others who have the diary. I think it would be interesting to see their reaction when they realize that a deceased person can also win the reward. And I say he should discover the diary. Bell-mère cannot be resurrected, and he doesn't know about it. An ignorant protagonist about a subject closely related to him leaves a very unpleasant feeling while reading, especially something as significant as the resurrection of a character. And he must be there to court her when she resurrects.

I hope something really happens, because I'm getting more and more tired of this story.

Talk about how to evoke reader frustration. I hope that in tomorrow's chapters, he at least brings Serafall into the mix. Let me know if there's anything else I can assist you with!

The issue isn't how many people are in your harem, but rather who they are. For instance, aside from Ravel and Sona, the others are just less important characters. I think most of us, myself included, expected the main characters from the original story to be in the harem.

The MC's attitude is really unpleasant. First with Ravel, then with Serafall. The excuse used to not engage with them is not good. If the excuse used for Ravel was already bad, Serafall's is worse. I prefer to see him acting like a slave to the system and taking action, instead of this dragging on with the girls, especially with Ravel, who has already shown to be in love with him. Being a dense MC doesn't make much sense. With the reward he received and what has been hinted so far, I think he should be able to realize that Ravel is into him.