ok can you please re-read your novel a lot of the genders he she him her needs fixed ok
While his father's face turned increasingly scarlet as his rage boiled, the mother was sending mixed signals. Her emotions were in turmoil, she didn't know what to do. Aiden's words were true, thinking about it she didn't even know why she was so angry with him at all. She is her mother, she is his son… she…
The Last Primal
Fantasy · Shaele
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"So, we have another reason for the hunt. I see." nodded Aiden and continued to watch with unfettered focus. He wanted to make sure he maximized his gains from this session. Meanwhile, Lily could be seen dangling her feet from the chair she was sitting on while listening to Granny. She wasn��t really interested in working today, but she wanted to stay close to her brother.
The Last Primal
Fantasy · Shaele
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hey no worries I am a new author too take your time trust me it will be better than trying to rush the story I still only got 10 chapters on my own novel but that is mainly due to school yahknow how that is but it also helps you look over the story with a more calmed mind set so yeh it be my best advice and it helps with a lot of the grammer issues that you don't notice at first that and it gives you the ability to not have to stress out about writing something noy liking it rewriting it just to realize it was better before so yeh but anywho I hope you develope a wonderful story. ✌😸
hey once again shamelessly 5 staring myself but this is an apology to all readers I haven't been able to write for the last few months due to school and work reasons oh good news I took writing classes for my senior year so I can fix any problems I had with my chapters oh and next update will be next saturday October 3rd 2020 so sorry for the inconvenience everyone
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original Sage Of The Zombie Apocalypse
This is the story of how I died ha just joking it's a story about a zombie apocalypse in a medieval theme with magic and martial arts being a sign of nobility and people without are peasants who can barely manage to run a farm in a world filled with strange magics and beast there are many races as well elves, dwarves, beast men, orcs, and more and our mc is a below average human that is a newly hired city wall night shift guard and low and be hold he's a foreseen hero with a system? what wait did I miss something what happened to the script eh who cares our mc Xian Xieo will be trying to protect his family, survive, complete missions from his system, and gain EXP to establish a surviver base and also this is my first novel I never done this before I hope you guys/gals enjoy it and give me any info I need for fixing any mistakes I make I should have fixed it in about a week oh and also first 3 in every comments section after chapter 5 will get a honourable mention as well as people who give gifts and so on I'll work hard for you so you can enjoy an update about at most every 2 or 3 weeks otherwise I will try to update daily!6 Chs 17 お気に入り
would be an amazing read but you need to unlock the chapters it's ridiculous to only have up to chapter 7 unlocked not many people can pay for this shit if you unlocked everything you'd get way more views better ratings and make more money heck just even make it cost fast passes I'd use every fast pass and voting stones for this it's interesting and well worth it but charging coins is just dumb pull your head out yo butt and make profit through being cheap nobody is gonna waste time on it if they can't even read it dude.
A Conscious Zombie
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