This would have been worthwhile if the MC had general Rico and the other elites use the amulet in prisons to have some of the really bad criminals, to be sacrifices and be made as capsules to save the MC's other family members and other worthy comrades!
Absolultely great! The MC should do this from time to time...
Do continue from this point instead of hacking your brain to rewrite. It's good as it is already. You can use the time to write more new chapters instead. Cheers! :)
Great that you're back and updated both your novels. Thanks and keep on writing! Cheers!
Finally...he has done it! Thanks for the chapter!
Great from beginning to end...the best One Piece fanfic! Can't wait for the next epic journey you'll be giving out. Thanks a lot! Cheers!
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Awesome ruthlessness. Removing trouble and garbage from it's root. Thanks for the chapter and keep on writing!
Awesome, thanks for the chapter! Keep on writing...
3 hands up on praise...3rd is the D! [img=recommend]
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original Wish for Rebirth
Martin, a 28 year old guy, is given the chance to be reborn to a magical world of Swords and Magic which he long wished for. A place where power and talent rules. MC will not be OP right off the bat, and will start from zero, but will be ahead in the future due to retained memories from birth. May start a bit slow as I want the MC to enjoy his progress milestones. He is not a push over and will be analytical and calculative. He will protect the ones important to him, and will not hesitate to kill those who threaten them or when he deemed it's required. It may seem somewhat cliche but I hope this will bring a bit of a different flavor at the table. Cheers! --------------------------------------------------- Notes: I'm doing this for free and now I understand that creation is indeed hard, so unconstructive comments/criticisms will be deleted. English is not my main language. Chapter update: 1 or 2/week is the target but may be able to post more when available Tags: Reincarnation, Start from zero, Weak to strong, Kingdom-building, Work-smart, Harem10 Chs 21 お気に入り
This book would have been good if not for the author making the MC stupid, by not killing the thugs before and inviting more trouble to himself! I'll give it a few more chapters the drop if the stupidity continues...
Physics The Greatest Magic
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