dark_helmet9

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2020-02-14 入りました Global
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dark_helmet9
dark_helmet9
2 days ago
Commented

definitely skipped a chapter or two

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dark_helmet9
3 days ago
Replied to 0dinson

basically take a bunch of superhero tropes, throw in a world spiraling the gutter, and add a bit of darkness and grit. put those in a blender and you get worm. honestly not a bad read. basic summary is everything until the 80s happened, then golden man appears, people start getting powers on the worst day of their lives and get an itch to get involved in conflict. fast forward to 2011 and main char gets powers. she really wants to be a hero, but is a stupid teen who then decides to infiltrate a minor villain team and bring them to justice. but turns out they chill and become friends. add in kaiju who pop up every 3 months, basically the illuminati, more villains,and a wandering band of murderhobos. and that's worm in a nutshell. still more but read it to find out.

dark_helmet9
dark_helmet9
19 days ago
Replied to Charles_Warriors

honestly i don't think the fruits had much to do with it. i think it had more to do with mentality. aokiji would have been more in the fight to disable akainu but not permanently as they are both marines. akainu would have been in the fight with full intent to kill so his justice prevails doesn't matter who stands in the way. by the time aokiji would have gone full force realizing akainu was actually trying to kill he would have been at a disadvantage catching up to akainu.

dark_helmet9
dark_helmet9
1 months ago
Commented

do you mean sabo and ace not zoro? his hometown was never officially stated, but with his power of getting lost he could be from anywhere in the one piece world

This was a medium-sized island with many verdant peaks. There seemed to be numerous villages scattered across it. Many ships were docked at the port, it was likely Luffy's hometown, Foosha Village, and also the hometown of Zoro and others, the Goa Kingdom!

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dark_helmet9
dark_helmet9
3 months ago
Commented

i think you missed a chapter on your patreon you have one listed as lackluster rewards. you mention the rewards in the beginning of this chapter but don't say what the rewards were.

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dark_helmet9
4 months ago
Replied to dark_helmet9

whoops sorry story is not finished went on permanent hiatus after it's chap 84 which with the way this one is be broken up would be chapter 400+

dark_helmet9
dark_helmet9
4 months ago
Posted

It's just another plagiarized story. funny how people post "advance chapters on patreon" when it's not even their work. if you want to read the story just go to fanfiction .net and search "daft morons" it will be the only story on that pops up harry potter and the daft morons. longer chapter and the story is already finished. don't pay for a story that is free.

dark_helmet9
dark_helmet9
8 months ago
Commented

if adding to the harem 5 janice and/or 2 cady only other would be 4 karen seems like she'd be fun, like phoebe from friends

dark_helmet9
dark_helmet9
8 months ago
Posted

not original. can easily read this story it's called harry potter and the spellbook of desire. and it is this exact story. if you want the semi similar but harry is the one only one using the book it's called harry's sex spellbook. same story just change to be harry instead of ron or ginny or later malfoy, the twins, etc

dark_helmet9
dark_helmet9
9 months ago
Commented

it's good that you addressed the changes in his behavior. he was starting to act a bit out of normal. although launch did do a quick 180, may want to explain that or mc will keep thinking she trying to get him to lower his guard, unless that's what your having her do. probably the dragonball wish he mentioned though. just a thought though does he have to go back to where he entered the universe to exit or can he exit anywhere? i remember in sw he was on the planet that he first arrived on i think.