whoops sorry story is not finished went on permanent hiatus after it's chap 84 which with the way this one is be broken up would be chapter 400+
It's just another plagiarized story. funny how people post "advance chapters on patreon" when it's not even their work. if you want to read the story just go to fanfiction .net and search "daft morons" it will be the only story on that pops up harry potter and the daft morons. longer chapter and the story is already finished. don't pay for a story that is free.
if adding to the harem 5 janice and/or 2 cady only other would be 4 karen seems like she'd be fun, like phoebe from friends
not original. can easily read this story it's called harry potter and the spellbook of desire. and it is this exact story. if you want the semi similar but harry is the one only one using the book it's called harry's sex spellbook. same story just change to be harry instead of ron or ginny or later malfoy, the twins, etc
it's good that you addressed the changes in his behavior. he was starting to act a bit out of normal. although launch did do a quick 180, may want to explain that or mc will keep thinking she trying to get him to lower his guard, unless that's what your having her do. probably the dragonball wish he mentioned though. just a thought though does he have to go back to where he entered the universe to exit or can he exit anywhere? i remember in sw he was on the planet that he first arrived on i think.
ooo interesting match ups. kinda worried for krillin though as you said tien is still the villain here. but at least we don't have to wait long for Carl to fight.
that would definitely work out. will need to account for how you want the universes to change with both the changes made by carl and without the characters. i also agree with bulma loving still being young while they have all gotten older.
thanks for the chapter. can't wait to see where you take the tournament and meeting the dragon crew. only issue with pod being taken isn't even an issue since in 12 years when after piccolo destroys it the remaining parts are used to make the ship to get goku to namek. there are at that time 2 more pods around raditz and nappa. but again 12 years so carl will probably be back to at least let bulma visit her parents and sister. also what is the time delay between worlds, does it change with coming back? i know star wars was basically 1 week marvel is 1 month sw. is it now 1:1 or still off? if still offset then sw is now over 4 years ahead. is db the same spent 2 months on namek so now 2 weeks marvel or is each universe going to be something different?
ya they were "together" for 15 years it was a straining point of the relationship. at least until Mister dark, broody, emo, whose family was killed, came along and she was basically i can fix him and show him love. just had the thought that must be where naruto got sasuke
i think you missed a chapter on your patreon you have one listed as lackluster rewards. you mention the rewards in the beginning of this chapter but don't say what the rewards were.
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