What's with the grammar? is this just mtl? honestly proofread your story, check for spelling mistakes, heck ai is free it can edit this confusing mess of a story.
Dog 's delusional here
Such strength... it seemed only Lady Sangonomiya could match him.
Genshin Impact: This Trainee Fatui Harbinger is Too Unreliable
Video Games · WiseTL
Yeah, I agree with you, honestly thought that after a few weeks of stacking chapters the plot would progress and get interesting. But it didn't, after the basketball game, it started to feel boring
Jiraya sure is delusional here
Hearing this, Jiraiya shook his head with a bitter smile: "How could I know what someone like him is thinking? I just hope that his presence doesn't cause the hard-won peace in the shinobi world to fall into chaos again."
I've Already Confronted the Five Kage, and the System Just Arrived!
Anime & Comics · Zaelum
The story seemed interesting until you read a few sentences. Don't know if English isn't the author's first language. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes, broken paragraphs or sentences, even chapters are painstakingly short, which doesn't even progress the story or add substance in some way. I'd recommend reading other works to see how they structure or outline their stories.
Yeah, reading it really ruined any immersion hahaha dunno if this is original or a translated chinese fanfic. gonna stop there, might see some nationalistic shite if it continues.
thanks for the chapter
it's MTL'd on wuxiap
boo hoo
"Those damn Uchiha dare to slander me like this!"
Uchiha's Taijutsu Supreme
Anime & Comics · ShadySmuggler