The Death Lord. Will he meet Teran perhaps?
‘If you don’t know what the Lands of Anwnn represent, it is a land where hellish creatures roam. Even the Fomorians don’t want to cause trouble to the Lord of Anwnn, Arawn, who lives in the Four-Peaked Fortress.’
Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular
Fantasy · Elyon
Hell yeah!! Finally in the coven.
And Fleet admiral.
Nonetheless, it was disappointing for the middle-aged man who desired to learn more about magic. It felt like a great loss, but there was no use in continuing to be depressed about it.
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Fantasy · Mister_Archon
The way you use rank frustrates me. Fleet admiral is his title not his rank. So just say admiral. We all know by now he is the fleet admiral. Also we know he is the highest position of power so there is no need to say it over and over and over. Also, 2nd lieutenant is the lowest ranking officer in the Marines. Just so you know. I love the story but your use of military language is appalling.
That’s just mean.
With this in mind, Abraham decided to go on a reading session after his grueling training with the crayon-eating cavemen.
Naval Gacha System: It's Time To Monopolize The Seven Seas!
Fantasy · Mister_Archon
First off, the story itself it very good. The only problem I have with it is how descriptive it is. It is almost like the author took a thesaurus and word vomited on the page. It almost feels like searching for word count by overly describing the most mundane details. Again the story is good. It’s just the writing is difficult to stomach sometimes.
But he didn’t use a sword. So how can he claim to be a master swordsman ?
A furrow creased Sendric's brow, etching a deep line across his weathered face. The man, a seasoned warrior with a mane of salt-and-pepper hair, sat at his desk, a prisoner to a storm of questions. His normally stoic expression had crumbled, replaced by a mask of bewilderment.
THE GENERAL'S DISGRACED HEIR
Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori
Ok so where did the dagger’s come from?
It just seems fast paced.
Happy Birthday!
Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular
Fantasy · Elyon