It's all good, keep up the good work. But there are a few wishes. Firstly, small chapters, their content is too truncated, there are few descriptions of the environment and I want to see more interaction of the character with the world. The second is a wish (or suggestion) to add well-developed friends. I believe that the orphanage will have one or two children with interesting characters and unusual quirks.
why not, but make it interesting!
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World Hopping Pikachu
Anime & Comics · Excavelier
Guy don't do this
How about Mahou Sensei Negima! There are very few works in this world, it has strong enemies, interesting abilities, and if the MC is a long-lived person, then he can participate in the UQ Holder canon!
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deletedopg
Others · Ailzonius
Reinhardt is a good name
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The nerfed Supreme Being
Anime & Comics · Anime_Asim
Well, I understand your point of view, but it's not the same as mine. If you want to be an OP from the very beginning, then I would like to gradually develop and explore the world, rather than getting everything at once
aren't these wishes too boring?
Good chapter, keep it up
Quirks can be anything from friction control to "Absolutely any ending other than this is unacceptable" (Allows him to nullify all endings he doesn't like. At the moment of death, one can say that one does not like such an end, become a god and return to the past, rolling back the entire metaverse to the beginning; after a long life, everything repeats again in an endless cycle. This power allows you to bring back to life those who were completely erased from existence without the possibility of recovery, as well as erase any character into absolute nothingness) (lol)
MHA: The Dominator
Anime & Comics · Charlie083