The name of the empire keeps changing and gets a little irritating
The enormous amount of spoils of war that Su Yu and Tina brought back breathed new life into the war-torn Golden Chrysanthemum Empire.
Games · Dull Fireball
Definitely the wrong name of the guardian god
With that, Kevin Forsythia's figure disappeared on the spot, vanishing in an instant.
Games · Dull Fireball
Where did he plagiarize it from?
It would be nice to know what is says in English. Not everybody knows Spanish.
Dante looked at his camera then noticed two police units chasing after us. "Show time ladies. Mariana, tú vas a la izquierda, yo voy a la derecha. Yo sigo a Shiro, tú sigues a Naomi."
Fantasy · Aisuru_Reborn
I’m guessing it was because it’s not on the authors page anymore
この本は削除されました。
Stop saying they muttered 2 words if they Only muttered one.
At the last moment, Waldo's lips finally moved, and he uttered two words.
Fantasy · AllenWorker
Not third person view if you say my
[: 3rd POV :]
Action · ADboy245
Why did you change the core realms names several times
ch 69 Bring Back The Champion Rank
Eastern · Three Golden Crow
I know that you’re editing the chapters already but I would suggest using grammerly if English isn’t your first language so that it can help your sentences better.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3. Alice (1) (R- 18) [Edited]
Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal
You have a lot of status messages that kind of get dull and boring to the plot of the story that takes up almost a whole chapter. I would suggest to cut down on the status messages and give more of a plot of what’s happening outside of the system.
ch 290 Supreme Venerate Fooled, The Law of All Desires, 3,000 Daos (Part 2)
Eastern · Li Baijin
Are you able to make the chapters a little bit longer but I love the novel so far.
ch 58 A Sudden Emergency!
Fantasy · LittleBastard879
He should be 7th stage now
A large amount of energy flew into his body, and he instantly felt his cultivation base increasing a step further, reaching the [ Saint Realm-6th stage ].
Erotic Adventures in the Omniverse: Vampire Lord got too many wives
Fantasy · Jin_moon