What do you suggest? I'm open to try and make it better.
[Serpent's Scale Whip]
Fantasy · Han_Sirang
Well the world in this novel is same but different than reality
Ronald & Siesta Corporations, commonly called RS, had designed two separate sets to play this game: the Standard set, which contained the body suit, headset, and haptic gloves but had a lower "immersion" rate, and the Premium set in the form of a full capsule, known as the "VR pod," with a longer life and a 100% "immersion" rate. Saad didn't quite understand what this "immersion" rate meant, as reviews suggested that there was no significant difference in the overall game experience.
Fantasy · Han_Sirang
ah so sorry! Just a mistake on my behalf! I will fix it.
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Fantasy · Han_Sirang
so there are two points- he thinks he will be back before sunrise since he has Freya's quest in the game morning time and second is that, Saad never thought of the time he would be wasting fighting monsters.
Thank you for your kind words <3 Ah yes it just might or might not.
can you elaborate?
Wasn't this a little too real?! The status effects were overwhelming, and Saad was in disbelief. He had read that the game was hyper-realistic, but this seemed a bit excessive. How was he going to even play this game if just the first snow caused him so many negative status effects? Perhaps the black fate was a huge issue after all. How was he going to survive and raise his character under these conditions?
Fantasy · Han_Sirang
Yes?
Thank you ^^. I do try to keep word count consistent.
thank you <3
In the context of the game, the effects the character feels are a result of the game's design to increase realism and immersion. While the character isn't physically harmed, the game can simulate emotional and sensory experiences—like fatigue, disorientation, or stress from being in intense situations—just like in real life. These effects don’t actually harm the player but are meant to heighten the emotional stakes and make the experience feel more authentic.
Exhaling a heavy sigh, Saad realized that as much as he wanted to brush off the encounter, it had left an impact on him. He climbed the slippery stairs of the well, his body still recovering from the battle, and his mind mulling over the clash with Ruth. As he emerged from the depths, he couldn't help but feel liberated. Having stayed under the surface for so long in darkness had really taken its toll.
Chimerical World System
Fantasy · Han_Sirang