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His kingdom looks like a copy of Sandman, it's not bad, I just think it's supposedly a Percy Jackson fic, not Sandman, so far everything indicates that all the events that happen in the books aren't even going to happen, which leaves the question why put PJ in the title, you could have perfectly done the same story using the mythology of any story. What bothers me the most is the romance, which is mediocre. And I don't know much about Greek weddings, but for the goddess of marriage to have sex before they're even engaged is stupid. This fic is still better than most in this site so i will still give you 5 stars.

It is in ao3 whith the same name, it have 17 chapters.

That's still not an answer. Just because it didn't happen in canon doesn't mean it can't be done in the fic. something that I consider a plot hole (in the canon), since if Trunks can affect/interfere the timeline of the past (delivering the medicine to goku) they could perfectly revive the others of the future timeline (using some of the alternatives mentioned above). As for the katanas, I think that katanas and dbz don't mix very well. in any other anime I wouldn't even pay attention to it, but in dbz I don't know why but it bothers me

even if by chance his intentions when fighting the androids were to protect the earth and not fight against a stronger opponent, that would not send him to heaven, his actions of enslaving planets under freezer are not erased by the sole intention of protecting a planet, which it failed. In picolo's situation you have me, since I don't know much about it, but shouldn't picolo also be from the dragon clan if they were the same person before? As a side note, my intention was not to criticize you in a bad way, I just wanted to give my point of view. I'll delete the review in a couple of days anyway.

how is bulma going to be happy if vegeta is not with her?, the guy definitely went to hell. she certainly could be happy reunited with her friends (and parents), but not happy enough as she would be alive, with her friends and her son with her. It seems more like the mc is escaping from his emotions and from the situation in which he finds himself. And I mean the kami fused piccolo, I think it's perfectly possible for him to do it, or he could even use the dragon balls from the past to figure out a way to find out where Namek is. or even Dende could go to the future, create a set of dragon balls and revive everyone. The only thing I'm saying is that I consider lazy writing that part of the fic. And yes, English is not my first language, but I'm not ashamed because I think I got the message across.

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